dragonqueen Posted February 8, 2004 Report Share Posted February 8, 2004 They say that I can walk on water And with your help I can. Lift me up with waves of love And I will walk on seas of joy. Lift me up with your saving hands And I will float on clouds of grace. They say that I can live forever And with your love I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorciere Posted February 8, 2004 Report Share Posted February 8, 2004 You say in your description that this is a religious piece and of course, the references are all there. I am not a religious person, but I still enjoy reading the works of others. I really liked this. It was short but said many things and despite the religious connotations I believe many people can relate to this on a more personal level. Self belief and the belief of those around you can truly lift you up. Death is never an end for those who loved and were loved, for they will always live in the hearts of others. Beautiful piece, thank you for sharing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted February 8, 2004 Report Share Posted February 8, 2004 This is a great poem and i enjoyed reading it alot i am not religous but i think that people can take it to be a different way than religious....as everyone can take this to there own personal level as sorcy said! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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