Arashi Posted January 23, 2004 Report Share Posted January 23, 2004 When the world finally ends I will still be alone Left in the darkest void again Lifelessly forever loving you Yearning for your touch upon my cheek Old times forgotten for the new Under the full blue moon Still lifeless after all these years Till the day you release my fears I remain motionless in a sea of sand and gulit Limbs torn away by your hands in a whirl Lustfully lovely this blasphemous girl Lost in a desert of sorrow and tears Open wounds have refused to heal Viciously tearing away all of my flesh Each day breathing, wishing for death My very organs pecked at by doves Everytime I look upon your smiling face Today you claimed you loved me still Occuring randomly after a kiss or two Moments after my heart exploded Offended by the lack of sincerity Remembering all of your dishonesty Rewarded falsely for the love I did keep On my pillow I started to weep With my final tear I began to sleep, still loving you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted January 23, 2004 Report Share Posted January 23, 2004 *pouts and wipes a tear from her eye* i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashi Posted January 27, 2004 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2004 (edited) thanks Arwen. This poem actually tok me longer to write then most of my poems. It took me about three days to write (I normally write mine in about fifteen minutes )it because I already had the first letter of ever line written in and I didn't want to start a line with the same word. I'm glad you liked it. I might do more in this manner. It was really fun. :ninja2: :zorro Creepy Zorro Edited January 27, 2004 by Arashi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted January 27, 2004 Report Share Posted January 27, 2004 Excellent poem, D. I get the image of a desert scene, with a poor lost wandering soul being tormented along his way by mirages and voices. I understand where you're coming from, and the inner strength needed to overcome such hardships is hard to come by. Search for an inner power and use it to your advantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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