dragonqueen Posted January 21, 2004 Report Share Posted January 21, 2004 These first three are, as the title says, spawned from brief obsessions of mine, which each lasted until I got it down on paper. The first one was with mermaids, the second with faeries. ************ 'Come, come,' she calls. 'Enter my watery halls. Forget everything above And leave behind those you love. Come to the dark and deep, And enter death's mysterious keep. Come, mortal, unto your doom, And snip your thread from Fate's eternal loom. Come, come, come,' she calls. ************* Eeerily enthralling, Softly calling, Darkly sweet, Deadly deceit. ************* I should like to tarry with the good folk, And pay no heed to time. To forget for just a while. Is that such a crime? I'll dance all through the night, And drink away the day. But days to weeks and weeks to months, Soon a year has sped away. But what if I were not to mind The passing of my life? To spend forever with the faeries Would that be such strife? ************* Don't know where to go Where to turn. What to love And what to spurn. Which road to take, Which song to sin. Which choice to make, Which hat to bring. Don't know how to cope, How to deal. Is there hope? Is it real? Someone help me, Help me please. I don't know how to be. Am I you or am I me? ************* Witching hour, witching hour. Spells are brewing in every tower. Lock your doors and windows tight, Until the ending of the night. Witches cackle and cauldrons bubble. Tonight they'll brew heaps of trouble. Hexes, curses, spells and jinxes, What a bunch of devilish minxes. When witching hour's come around, You'll not want to be found. Ungodly power's at it's height. In the twelth hour of the night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted January 21, 2004 Report Share Posted January 21, 2004 I notice your description doesn't mention what kind of feedback you'd like. I'd like to respond to your writings, but I'll hold off until I know what your feedback feelings are. (This is my way of asking your feelings on the matter ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonqueen Posted January 23, 2004 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2004 If that was bothering anyone else, I've filled it in now. I prefer a pretty high level of feedback, so I know what to improve on, or what people liked about my work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted January 23, 2004 Report Share Posted January 23, 2004 Wow i really really like it its pretty cool kinda sounds like a song i wrote a little while age it kick ass!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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