sweetnightmare

Reads and thinks* I like the pure emotion in this, it makes me think of times that i could relate to it keep writing.

Rushed to the door to call after the figure in the hall going about his way* "thank you, Good sir i would be very happy any time at all to hear your thoughts. your replys are something i often stumbled across while i was wondering" smiles* " it is great to hear that someone understands.."

Looks around the room, a little unsure* Thank you for your kind welcomes. I am here to write and learn. I think all the people here have so much talent, it just blows me away. I got lost wandering around for hours. Do tell me, what you think and your suggestions

...I am here to learn, do tell me what you think... looks around, then at the figure talking to her* jumps and hugs* then backs away a little uneasy and smiles* ...Yeah, maybe i needed that... It is kind of long, but i think that is because my poems are stories in a way as well... Would it do better to write shorting things? One day i want to be a great writer, now to persue such a thing.. You can help me, i am willing :woot:

Reads* "Wow" Thinks in her head* "Only few times before this day I have ever been so lost in something i have read, as much as i am now. Continue dear friend to write i implore you, never give up on it." Then turns away

While walking around looking at all the new things sweetnightmare sees the list...* Remembering the kindness of this lady, who is on this quest... " I am new as well, but will join in for the thrill of it all" Smiles and writes her name on the list of names*

I will not hide the fact that this poem makes my arms tinggle. Thinking of it all... But i like it for the fact it is full of such emotion. Maybe a lighter note or freedom will come to this quited and hushed side. Brave words, in what seems to be a hell inside. Sweetnightmare

"I know I am a Stranger here, but I would like to become a regular...although I am not sure if I am going about this all in the right way. I just need to write. and company is always good" Looks around and wonders if she knows what she was doing* " well i guess i will find out soon" Sighs and waits*

application ehh? Hmm... Under that great willow Your Head lies softly on your pillow The tree about you a great willow It smooths your blushed cheek Your eyes awake and rush around For what you know, Which is unfound "Where am I this place so far from home" It is like nothing you have ever known So warm it is, so peaceful It is here that fairies swarm I watch you from the tree in my world Hoping you will wander deeper still You have come under my sight For a reason I know is right But still you choose to close you eyes in fear And close your ears, never to hear my calling In confusion and remorse I desided to take a leap and be found I spread my wings as far as they will go so I start to the low When I reached you so cold you were For you feared the untold So i gave you my wings of gold Which is all i had to give I just wanted you to truly live Oh, what fun we had that day But you had to go away You closed your eyes and disappeared Back into your world So i wait, day by day for your return Sitting alone in my fern of dreams For eternity it seems For you to close your eyes And be at my grasp And your return will be at last Then by time is so shall pass The end is near But i do not fear For i know when the sun goes down You my friend will be found With your head softly on your pillow Sleeping soundly under that great willow

Pictures the sence in her head* aww poor thing....Smiles i like it Sweetnightmare

Greetings, i know i am new. Please bare with me... here is something i have written.... When you entered my world Black was the only light Every thing was dark and cold This is how it was tolled Pay the price The ferry is waiting No passengers is it taking When the dark black enfolds White like an angel Blue eyes like the sea Inside, you are something like me The only difference I can barely see It is the sparkling light That you shine every night Very white,bright sparkling light Pay the price The ferry is waiting No passengers is it taking When the dark black abyss enfolds Black like the tar of the earth Black and red like the coals on a fire burning inside out Pain Left wanting Left alone In the dark Paying the price Already rolled the dice The ferry is waiting No passengers is it taking When i come to ride the tail White lights from the heavens Marked with the craft of caring Ceiled with the crest of love Reaching for the sky The land up above Black and white how can they mix? The gray they will become Who is willing to pay that price To roll the dice and sacrfice for a tainted me? The Ferry is waiting No passengers is it taking When the gray enfolds Now in heaven and above Down to the face of the earth The rain drop tears are felt From a black that mixed with white And the hand they both are dealt One nor the other is the same as before The music is a whole different score But together, now and forever They will never sever Because now, not black and white They are gray together