Wylde

I do know that the rhyming changes but that is what i wanted to do , thank you for your suggestions Wylde

Nicely done ,i've heard this one before im sure from you , and i agree it is a little annoying but it is not my style of writing *hugs* talk to ya soon Wylde

Your words turn to poisen , they infect my soul but i have still risen, and must become whole The path you have chose , has crushed my heart like a dying rose, I was torn apart I tried to change my love, but my mind was frozen so i picked up this pen, and tried to rise above but through it all , you've offered my protection a lot of love and affection, but still my heart does fall Wylde

All the sudden the door opens loudly ,and in walks a slender red headed woman in a black dress . She shakes her hair wildely to get the rain out . She walks up to the Bar keep . Bar keep pass me an ale..

No my name doesnt refer to oscar wilde , i just spell wild differently and i like it Wylde

I loved your poem as i was reading it it reminded me of my friend and I , and it really made me think about it Wylde

Thank you for your suggestion , it means a lot to me . I'm new at writing poems so any help i cant get is great Wylde

Through these eyes I see your soul With my dispise My hate grows whole In my voice You hear my pain Now it's your choice To pick in vane It's time to decide Do i continue to hate My heart has died But i still do wait Wylde