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Apparently there is still reason to fear...
Thanks for the comments.
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We have left the Nuclear Age
Have forgotten that we're gonna kill us all
The fallout washed over me like rays of the sun
Warm on my arms and upraised face
I've never once feared that I'd be vaporized
as I drew ragged breath under a meager desk
(I suppose my father had, I've never thought to ask)
I see signs for shelters and laugh.
I have seen a silo before,
seen it empty and derelict
The middle of the Arizona desert, 1995
But I can't understand what it was for
I can't comprehend Thermonuclear War
What ever happened to all that fear?
Hopped a train and said its goodbyes
Came back a moment later under different guise.
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All your days should be great, Birthdays only better. Hope this one is.
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Music softly blaring all around
And two dance slowly to the silent sound
A pair of hearts fill in for the missing drum's pound
The melody played out by their feet on the ground
They escape away to the place that they've found
A place just beyond the night's hidden bound
And though the groups of people still surround
They are alone,
In love.
"Dispell this pernicious ennui"
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I'm just going to quote Steinbeck on this one...
"A man is a lonely thing."
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A subtle shift of languid light
Slips lazily through the curtians
Red tinted but bloodless
Rebounds off
The old grandfather clock
And ancient vase
That stand in the corner
As silent sentinels
Who watch over me
With gazes of contempt
As I lie lifeless on the floor
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As always, I thank you for your comments Wyvern.
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My decisions have to be made after dark
For they can not stand the light of day
Under the accusing light of the sun
I stand powerless to act
Immobilized by a single castigating ray
But with the sun safe in bed
My soul is set free
And I am granted the will to act
To finally let the me be me
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Naked with the lights on
I'm ugly; perverse.
Hewn from soft sandstone; an unrhythmic verse.
But as the lights fade and finally die
My mind leaves my body and is set loose to fly
Wildly though the black open sea that is time.
Aimlessly though the open summer night sky.
I am allowed to dance with the questions that try,
With some measure of luck, to keep me awake as I lie
Upon my bed,
Still naked, now beautiful.
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Some slight changes
My rivers are dammed up
Jammed up
Straining to break free
And she won't take
and he won't take
and I won't take me as me
But what then?
When the levies break
and my world becomes the sea
What then my friend?
Can I continue to be?
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Am I a young man who's stumbled into an old man's world,
Or are all of the old stuck in mine?
Blowing around like yesterday's news;
slightly soggy and past their prime.
Their moth-eaten ideas so covered in dust
are rendered useless to me
I've spent so long trying to get young
and now that I'm here I'll reserve my right
to disagree.
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I've written these over the past twenty four hours. Hopefully I can do something with them later.
#68
The eldritch noise of AM radio waves
wakes me from my sleep
What time is it?
11pm or 3am
For all I know I might be dead
This is hell or purgatory
Surely not heaven, not for me
But I'll settle for this place;
out of time and out of space
An existence that may only lie within my mind
And a voice in the dark that sounds a lot like mine
Says "Go to sleep friend, it will be alright"
A lie
But I don't mind
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My rivers are dammed up
Jammed up
Straining to break free
And she won't take
and he won't take
and I won't take me
But what then?
When the levies break
and my world becomes the sea
What then my friend?
Can I continue to be?
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Am I a young man who's stumbled into an old man's world,
Or are all of the old stuck in mine?
Blowing around like yesterday's news;
slightly soggy and decades past their prime.
Their moth-eaten ideas so covered in dust
are rendered useless to me
I've spent so long trying to get young
and now that I'm here I'll reserve my right to disagree.
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You know I'm glad you're back.
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A very Lo-Fi demo of this song can be found here Thanks for listening.
Verse 1:
Dusts commin' up on a westbound wind
It blows me away and I'm gone
I'm livin my life on a hope and a prayer
And a worn out, torn out song
Chorus:
Well take me away from here
I need to get out of this place
Make me afraid of fear
And wipe the smile off my face
Verse 2:
I'm ten thousand miles from where I've been
And ten thousand from where I'm goin'
I've grown so tired of the same old thing
So sick of what's right and what's wrong
Chorus:
Take me away from here
I need to get out of this place
Make me afraid of fear
And wipe the smile off my face
Verse 3:
Been shovelin' smoke for twenty years
Please tell me this 's not where I belong
I thought I'd grow out of my teenage fears
Well it looks like I was wrong
Chorus:
Take me away from here
I need to get out of this place
Make me afraid of fear
Wipe the smile off my face
Take me away from here
Just throw me into outer space
Wipe the smile off my face
Wipe the smile off my face
Wipe the smile off my face
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Congratulations to all.
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April 10, 2006.
A Supermarket in California
Allen Ginsberg
What thoughts I have of you tonight, Walt Whitman, for I
walked down the sidestreets under the trees with a headache
self-conscious looking at the full moon.
In my hungry fatigue, and shopping for images, I went into
the neon fruit supermarket, dreaming of your enumerations!
What peaches and what penumbras! Whole families shopping at
night! Aisles full of husbands! Wives in the avocados, babies in the
tomatoes!--and you, Garcia Lorca, what were you doing down by the
watermelons?
I saw you, Walt Whitman, childless, lonely old grubber,
poking among the meats in the refrigerator and eyeing the grocery
boys.
I heard you asking questions of each: Who killed the pork
chops? What price bananas? Are you my Angel?
I wandered in and out of the brilliant stacks of cans
following you, and followed in my imagination by the store detective.
We strode down the open corridors together in our solitary
fancy tasting artichokes, possessing every frozen delicacy, and never
passing the cashier.
Where are we going, Walt Whitman? The doors close in an
hour. Which way does your beard point tonight?
(I touch your book and dream of our odyssey in the
supermarket and feel absurd.)
Will we walk all night through solitary streets? The trees
add shade to shade, lights out in the houses, we'll both be lonely.
Will we stroll dreaming of the lost America of love past
blue automobiles in driveways, home to our silent cottage?
Ah, dear father, graybeard, lonely old courage-teacher, what
America did you have when Charon quit poling his ferry and you got out
on a smoking bank and stood watching the boat disappear on the black
waters of Lethe?
[This is the first Ginsberg poem I ever read, and is still one of my
all-time favorites. There are a lot of similarities between Ginsberg
and Walt Whitman, maybe the most famous American poet, who wrote a
hundred years earlier. Both wrote poetry for and about ordinary
people, used a style that's almost conversational, and were gay.
Ginsberg teases out the similarities here, especially the loneliness
of being gay in America: "through solitary streets ... home to our
silent cottage." I adore the strange dreaminess of this, and the
vivid language and images. What peaches and what penumbras!]*
* Commentary is by the Yahoo user who created and chose these poems. I wish I could say I have some idea of who she is, but I honestly don't. Contact me if you're interested in some links that can give you more information about her or her Yahoo newsgroup.
I love Ginsberg and Whitman, so this poem is wonderful. I do not however agree with some of the comments made by the Yahoo Reviewer.
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Congratulations.
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Thanks for the comments all.
Well damn the ubiquitous They
But They say
And They say
They say that I've gone away
To boldly flee another day
To form my image in brittle clay
Well I think this time I'll decide to stay
For just one more act in this endless play
For just one more stroll down this forgotten way
Beneath the moon, and the stars, and the trees -
Thank you for the comments both of you.
As for the whole italics thing if you looked back at my works almost everyone of the 66 or more poems posted here are italicized. Its just something I do, though I understand what you're saying about the "They"'s not sticking out. Also as far as the first line of the third stanza goes, I debated about removing the first two words, but decided to keep them since I felt it gave it a bit more lyrical quality when read aloud. I suppose I'm just going to have to record it or something.
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Damn the ubiquitous "They"
Well They say
And They say
They say that I've gone away
To boldly flee another day
To form my image in brittle clay
Well I think this time I'll decide to stay
For just one more act in this endless play
For just one more stroll down this forgotten way
Beneath the moon, and the stars, and the trees -
Sorry I didn't say it earlier....
Thank You.
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Eh, Harry Potter wasn't that good; mostly over hyped. The characters stay pretty much the same through the six or so most dynamic years of their lives and despite mountains of ineptitude, always seem to come out on top.
As for really good books...
I'd have to say the best book I've read lately has either been John Steinbeck's "East of Eden" or Jack Kerouac's "On The Road" both of which left me speechless.
Oh, and on a book related note I have some sad news. Jim Rigney, a.k.a. Robert Jordan, the author of one of the most successful fantasy series of recent years, The Wheel of Time, has been diagnosed with amyloidosis and been told he's got around 4 years to live. I hope he beats the disease, and from the press release he sent out last week, it sounds like he fully intends to.
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Some recent good films I've watched were...
Good Night, and Good Luck, Jarhead, The Weather Underground, No Direction Home, The Station Agent, and Blade Runner.
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Sorry, this one's a little silly and not all that good, but I was bored on my lunch today.
I have no room for waste or error
My words they must be terse
Writing on napkins I fear
Has proved to be a dreadful curse
And even though its just begun
This poem has reached its end
Punctuated by a ketchup stain
I once had called my friend
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