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  • Birthday 03/05/1987

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  1. ALL my poems are hip hop songs this might not be my best work but it is by far my favorite, my favorite part of it is "now the memory of her scent makes me nauseous and the scent of her memory has made me more cautious" as soon as i wrote it, it reminded me of sage or slug but only wyvern would know about that
  2. this poem means a lot to me, it has a second meaning read it first ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- when i was down, god gave me hope he sent her to me to keep my dreams afloat i was standing on the edge, he pushed me off the cliff i fell past rock bottom into a never ending pit in trouble with the law in more ways then one almost ruined my life, god what have i done starting to not believe in the almighty lord not knowing his plan, n what he had in store for a thug with potential going down the wrong path will he make me take a u-turn or make me feel the wrath of life it doesnt matter either way i'll do my best to make it through cant see the obstacles what am i gonna do everything you can imagine going wrong all around a lightning strike hit me, and left me lying on the ground rain pouring down hitting me from head to feet im not sure how long i was there unconscious in the street please, god, dont leave me hopeless ill do anything i need to succeed, i gotta focus sometimes i wonder, what i would amount to if we had never met and i had to live without you please, god, dont leave me hopeless ill do anything i need to succeed, i gotta focus sometimes i wonder, what i would amount to if we had never met and i had to live without you the very next day i was sitting in class the bell rung, i walked out, n saw a bright flash then all of a sudden standing right in front of me was the most beautiful girl that i had ever seen i looked at her neck and saw "angel" on her chain i walked up, introduced myself, n she told me her name i asked if she was from heaven, n she replied with "thats right" so she gave me her # and told me to call her that night me n that girl we could talk for hours she especially liked it when i surprised her with flowers our relationship was more than priceless like discover we were inseparable respectable and like no other there was no doubt in my mind that she was the love of my life and there was no doubt in my heart that id make her my wife i couldnt imagine a day without her by my side so please dont take her away from me please, god, dont leave me hopeless ill do anything i need to succeed, i gotta focus sometimes i wonder, what i would amount to if we had never met and i had to live without you please, god, dont leave me hopeless ill do anything i need to succeed, i gotta focus sometimes i wonder, what i would amount to if we had never met and i had to live without you until now i didnt know how this story would end or how my friend gone wife could backtrack back to friend all i know is somewhere along the line i messed up and failed it seems like ive taken the last breath that my lungs would inhale regardless of when or how you have your heart broken you feel like your fire's extinguished, the tribal council has spoken this indescribable feeling dwelling deep inside your soul you're empty now, shes stolen from your once strong and prideful whole crying denying accepting regreting is all i've been doing since she packed up and left me regretting accepting once again followed by mending reflecting forgetting protecting correcting now the memory of her scent makes me nauseous and the scent of her memory has made me more cautious yea i thought she was the one but there's no time to mope even though ive lost her, god will always bring me hope ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i was dating a girl named hope, and she was my best friend, and my girlfriend for some time, shes helped me a lot through things so "Hopeless", aside from meaning without hope, also means im without her now...thats why it means so much to me
  3. Wyvmettic and the Dope IRC Freestyle - Volume 1.5 and a half WB Dope, now he's arrived, there's a hope * Wyvern notes that on lines, Wyv chokes But it's the only way he can provoke ;p * |DoPeY| is now known as ThE|DoPe as soon is a walk in the pen wyv starts to rhyme then i realize that im right on time i look at my watch, its only 12:39 me warming up sends chills down peoples spines Sorry longer afk than I expected. Got a call from a friend who always keeps me laughing. * Sal-7-11 is now known as Salinye laughing is good OH I"m sorry I interrupted the free style! BAD Salinye! Naaawwww, I'm just occasionaly writing some random syllabel pairing/rhymes when they hit Cus, y'know, the pairing and the rhymes are both pretty legit yea me n wyv havent freestyled together here in a long time * Wyvern is currently writing PM, hence he cannot commit full time Well, I'm pretty newbie to the free style thang First rule of thumb: no need to use slang some times i think back to back in the day when me wyv and others used to rhyme for play thats old school stuff im reflecting on in my head but now schools in session time to wake the dead Man, those math tests are really the things I dread Yeah, but it's good for the brain, gotta keep it fed. They'll flip you inside out and spin circles round your head dont u just wish you could sleep insted? I don't have to take'em anymore, but when I was I was fed Up, that is, with all the complex equations Never could gets the X variable seperation lol lol L.O.L... that spells Lost over logarithms Throwing in numbers cus I can't keep the rhythm Still, last time I faced an isoceles, it was bugged Pythagorus got a theorum, but he gets no love * Salinye can't believe Wyv let a geld fall to the floor * Wyvern races for the geld and picks it up Rubs it shiny, and pockets it... yup ;p Protractors protacted, we need lie detectors To be able to distinguish between abnormal vectors one time i was just sittin down in math class n i was thinking to myself my teach was a psycopath pi r sqared, she was loosing me i didnt kno that math was so confusing wyv * Wyvern s'poses he could set it off on math for a bit * Wyvern places his half-written PM carefully in the corner so it won't be wrecked * Wyvern is now known as Wyvmetti aight now its time to get the party started RIP dopey and wyv the recently departed Do the math! All the crazy numbers don't add up The classes are just there to teach to disrupt All of the common thoughts and goals That poor highschool children set wanting gold Somewhere in the future, but they aren't seeing that With all this mathematical Bill Gates computer crap I mean, what's up with teachers focussing on memorization * ThE|DoPe sets a back beat Of formulas, rather than rehabilitation? I think that most kids couldn't tell Geomettry from algebra Calculus kills creativity, while accounting houses tha Professions that nobody wants to take up confessing Man, they just take math cus it's a GCR And they want to have the right angle for steering a car When they take their drivers license test, but don't get to far Since they were off by three degrees and permenently scarred And the driving instructor thought that they had flunked math When it was there major, when will they cease with the crap About circles and perfectly defined equations When creativity is what really gets the mind racing So next time your math teacher wants you to memorize Just throw your hands up and wave a middle finger in the sky Peace ;p
  4. so much for that im back on the track i've decided to spill my rap while i slack here we go again not giving a dollar or a ten just adding my 2 cents in presence of all from the pen Peredhil started off and his flow was off the chain Wyv kept it goin now i've got to maintain this rhyming mentality that we've all come to love lets all get along no need to push and shove this psychobabble-ness i cant resist dont get me started you dont want this to pursist if you get me in the mood to contend just stop "X" do not pass, if you do, criss cross all confused you become, im the one and only, thats plainly the case we're faced with solely because Dope is like "whatever" and my eyes are rolly unitl next time when we meet again dont forget to bush your teeth and the hair on your head look there's a rubberchicken or maybe it's a hen please excuse the invisible ink that came out of my pen
  5. whoa, peredhil, i like i like. didnt know you had that kind of potential wyv. what can i say.... great job using people's names from the pen, very creative. i cant add my 2 cents tonight, i have a lot of work but expect a relpy in the near future
  6. fine dont take credit for it Gyr, i knew it was one of you people who live on IRC that suggested it. Oh well, i cant figure out how to change the description
  7. As the clouds darkened, the blades sharpened on the knifes, of the purple fuzzies getting ready for the fight, while the lizard-men relaxed with delight, they sat back ate a snack waiting for their life, to continue on and on day to day, then the purple fuzzies snuck up in all their drive way’s, they knocked down the doors and to the lizards amaze, the battle begun like hell was just raised, the lizard-men got their guns not at all prepared, as fear and anger was all their eyes glared, they were scared that they would be defeated in their home, so the cocked it back pulled the trigger then froze, as the bullet left the gun and the adrenaline rose, the fuzzy did some matrix ish and the bullet grazed his nose, some blood fell I wont tell what happened next, cuz it happened so fast I cant type in hypertext, when the battle ended both sides spent days in morn, except the purple fuzzies celebrated the death of their sworn, enemy till the day only one race ruled the earth, so there was no war and the children wouldn’t be traumatized at birth, well anyway the lizard-men were buried beneath, the feet of the purple fuzzy wuzzy contact eye lenzy frenzy fleet, and this is about where my story ends, until next time when the lizard men rise from the dead for revenge
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