Tralla
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Aww... This is so cool! Now why can't I find I guy like that???
Great poem Falcon, with a touching message. =)
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*first comment happy dance*
an interesting topic, but a valid one. There is a reason I take a shower every morning, besides cleanliness. I've even scared myself a few times by looking in the mirror after getting up... oi. =D Good writing, keep it up!
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Yep, that definitely sounds familiar. Interesting poem, gwai.
*applause*
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hm... usually I'm on the giving end of the Silent Treatment, not the receiving end. *evil laugh*
Beautifully portrayed.
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I like this. Hell, I've done this. =) I can almost see this day, and this person walking through it. Very cool.
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Although this seems somewhat small and simple after what Wyvern just wrote... I really like this. The words seem very powerful to me, and the speaker's warring emotions are almost tangible. Very well done.
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It's not the same style, really, but this poem really reminds me of Poe's The Raven. With a far more amusing ending, of course. Good writing!
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It's interesting that you all mention childhood, because I didn't even think of it. Childhood is kind of like a beginning to me, but this seemed more directed at an end, whether it be in adolescence, adulthood, or old age.
LoL and a good eye on the Hollow Men... it's one of the poems I'd read lately, so it probably did influence it, a little.
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I don't know you, but I'm sure it would be fun, so come back as soon as real life permits, okay? =)
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"Death of a Whisper"
Whisper.
Anxious voices
Tittered fright
Skirting shadows
Restless night
Whimper.
Darkened corner
Bolted room
Beacon snuffed
Herald doom
Scream.
Viper reflex
Pounding knells
Fading daze
Regret swells
Whisper.
Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the Lord my soul to keep
And if I die before I wake
And if I die before I wake
And if I
- Tralla
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I see it as very funny, but I also don't think it's morbid. It's almost like a dark version of a Carpe Diem poem. Very well done.
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*adds her whistle to Gyr's appause*
Very cool.
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It's sad and beautiful at the same time. I love it.
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The words themselves, and the message they sent, were so powerful I didn't even notice the rhythm was off (if it was). =) Wonderful poem.
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That is very cool. And I agree with Peredhil, now I wanna write one too! =P
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*indulges in a brief crazy happy dance before reverting to her normal, nondescript self with a happy grin* =D
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* A relatively ordinary looking girl enters, casting about unobtrusively for the application desk. Spotting what she's looking for through a concealing screen of scraggly, mousy brown hair, she scurries over and places a small sheet of paper on the smooth wooden writing surface. Scribbling something swiftly in a small, neat script, the girl leaves her application in plain view and quickly exits the building. The slip of paper reads as follows: *
I would like to join. Although I am perhaps more quiet than some, I am very active and willing to read, write, and contribute as much as possible. I submit a new poem for my application, for my stories are generally not in the "short" category and my rp'ing leaves much to be desired.
Sincerely,
Tralla
"No Regrets"
I was an almost happy child
With almost tranquil teens
I was an almost successful adult
With many almost dreams
I was an almost noted athlete
With an almost remembered end
I was an almost social person
With many almost friends
I almost had a spouse, to come home to every night
I almost had a family, to bring meaning to my life
I almost found religion, to fill my empty heart
But in the end I found I’d made
Far too many almosts from the start.
Lost and Found (Not Depressing!)
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Aw, thanks Ozzy. =) Yes, I did make my sig. Sorry, I know it's Ager, but the damn thing's on auto-post and half the time I don't remember to turn it off. *Kicks at her absent-minded goblin*