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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

Valdar and Astralis

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  1. Broken bottles,

    about me fall.

    covering the floor.

    I am the master brewer.

     

    Aching muscles, Blackened face.

    My hammer drops,

    to smash a pot.

    For I am a smith.

     

    I tie sheep gut

    Around wooden shaft,

    And poke my eye.

    I am the master fletcher.

     

    The meal is hot and spicy,

    Yet none do I eat,

    For I hate fish.

    but yet I cook.

     

    A lump of clay,

    I push into fire.

    The jar melts.

    I am the potter.

     

    How small the needle

    That pierces my thimble

    And into my thumb.

    I am the tailor.

     

    How perfect the gem,

    Set into this ring.

    I cleave it.

    I am the jeweler.

     

    My fingers are calloused,

    My eyelids weigh down.

    Yet I carry on.

    I am the insane.

     

     

    You have gotten better at line-by-line writing! (1)

    ***ooc chatter***

    Appreciate any feedback. :)

    I don't actually know what form of writing is this, I doubt it qualifies as a Haiku. And it's certainly not a poem.

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