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Valdar and Astralis

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  1. Broken bottles, about me fall. covering the floor. I am the master brewer. Aching muscles, Blackened face. My hammer drops, to smash a pot. For I am a smith. I tie sheep gut Around wooden shaft, And poke my eye. I am the master fletcher. The meal is hot and spicy, Yet none do I eat, For I hate fish. but yet I cook. A lump of clay, I push into fire. The jar melts. I am the potter. How small the needle That pierces my thimble And into my thumb. I am the tailor. How perfect the gem, Set into this ring. I cleave it. I am the jeweler. My fingers are calloused, My eyelids weigh down. Yet I carry on. I am the insane. You have gotten better at line-by-line writing! (1) ***ooc chatter*** Appreciate any feedback. I don't actually know what form of writing is this, I doubt it qualifies as a Haiku. And it's certainly not a poem.
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