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Did you know that the inventor of mountain dew was William Jones? Interesting Trivia...lol. BTW, great poem, though I prefer soda or cider...OR MAINLINING CAFFEINE!!!MWAHAHAHA!!!THE POOOOOOOOOOOOWER!!!
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Read the subject a few times, and imagine I repeated myself...LOL!
Great poem, and you know I think you're a great poet...err..poetess...err....damn...
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*Falcon scrambles around trying to apologize, and ends up flat on his face in front of Signe*
I'm sorry I'm sorry, I have no clue how this one slipped by me...grr...bad computer.
Anyway, good grief you're a wonderful poet...err...poetess...err...whatever. Whatever it is, you're amazing at it, like really really really really really good...hmm...is it potatoess? Or Potatoe...hmm...
*Falcon walks off mumbling to himself, determined to solve the riddle once and for all.*
*A few seconds later, he hits his head on a low doorway, passes out, and forgets the entire thing*
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(Conversion confusion, this is the original post in this thread)
This is kinda weird...I've got an idea, it's to different people...each song has a different chorus, but similar structure...lesse here...
Oh yeah, and I realize the structure is flip-flopped on the last verse and the first.
Not really songs, poems.
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Love me,
Like I wanted you
Hate me,
The way I needed to
Kill me
Under the shining moon
Drop me
And watch me fully bloom
I don't need your life
Or your everpresent glances
What is the deep problem
That you have?
I needed you for so long
But now I don't and I'm so happy
I love all this freedom
That I have...
Why did you make me
Love you?
I knew you wanted my heart
Me too
This is so strange to me
Is it?
Or am did I ever really
Exist?
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Humor me
Whilst we sit alone
Hold me
When I need a home
Love me
As a friend always
Help me
Till the end of days
I never knew how
Much you were there
Until you told me why
Oh why?
You've done so much for me
And never asked for
Anything in return
Thank you...
Why have you always
Helped me?
You've always been a true
Friend to me...
I know I've tried for you
So hard
To be the kind of friend
You deserve...
One will read it
One will not
One will be there
One will not
Well then, this seems fairly easy.
Thank you Jess, for all you've done.
And Goodbye, Andrea, thanks for all the suicidal nights.
Good Riddance.
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This poem was good the first time I read it.
It was better the second time.
The third time, it was amazing.
This is the fourth time. I have to stop reading it, or my head will explode.
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Mwahaha, that was good, I remember that...great thread...and I especially liked the part where I chimed in with 'I got put in a blender!'
YAY!
Of course, things haven't much changed...
*Walks off singing I got put in a blender to himself*
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I like the ones where the Dragon wins
Good poem though, and amazingly, the lines are long...I've noticed all of my poetry has really short lines. this one doesn't. Don't think I'm crazy, just tired.
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YAY! Good poem...though I never knew that you were a female...err...sorry, miss.
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Thanks, Ozymandius...hmm...I'm wondering whether an electric guitar would work too well at a gathering...
MWAHAHAH!
Cioden Darkeye
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Good grief, have you ever written a BAD poem?
I'm running out of compliments, brilliant as always, Peredhil.
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Oh yeah, it's Nyyark, go Nyyark, yay!
This is really good, go for it!
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Great poem, Peredhil...well, I don't think you've ever written something that I didn't like, but just reaffirming it...
THIS IS GREAT STUFF!!!
Cioden Darkeye
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I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent, I'M JUST CRAZY!
lol
Go jess! I've already told you this poem is fantastic...etc...etc...but now you know again.
Cioden Darkeye
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You held me close,
My love was fine
I could never
ever realize
The looks were true
The purpose false
Back up girl
It's time to halt
An end to all
My suffering
An end to things
love didn't bring
So listen now
To my little song
And when I'm done
Go on alone
I think you should...
BACK UP
Give me space
All your memories
in my face
BACK UP
Stand back now
I'm too far gone to
Wonder how
BACK UP!!!
I listened to
Your misery
The right thing, yes
But oh the pain
I never ever
Thought of myself
Although I did it
For your health
My love was fine
My love was true
My love was lust
I wanted you
Not your body
But just you
Love's two ways girl
How about you
Why don't you just...
BACK UP!
Clear on out
Your mistakes are
Your own doubts
BACK UP!
Wipe your eyes
It's your turn to
Realize
You won't change
Without the truth
So fall on down
And break your youth
I'll stand by
Ya need to fall
If you don't lose once
You'll lose 'em all
So don't curse me
Cause I don't care
Life is better
When you breathe fresh air
so...
BACK UP!
You're going to crash
Sit around blaming life
And fall down on your ass
BACK UP!
Life sucks, so @#%$ it
Live your own life
And carry your own bucket
BACK UP!
BACK UP AND TAKE A LOOK AROUND!
BACK UP!
Cioden Darkeye
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(Date stamp/conversion confusion, this is actually the first post)
Bear with me here, this sounds a lot like Powerman 5000...I think...but I can't be sure. So just think of it as a rock song.
Jump to the beat
Let yourself go
Shake your head
And feel the tempo
You're all alone
In a sea of flesh
Feelin' nothing' pressin' in
'Cept for the breath
Suddenly stop
Ask yourself why
Why do you feel
this urge inside?
I've got the answers
I've got the show
Get ready, 1 2 3
Here we go!
Why, why,
Why don't ya die?
Why don't I sprout
Black wings and fly?
Why won't she love me
Why does he lie?
Why does the anger
Well up inside
Tell me the answers
or shut up and sigh
Why, why why why why?
Sit on the floor
Head in your hands
He's out @#%$
Another woman
You won't accept it
You won't believe
You don't require
A cost for his need
A quarter whore
Is how you feel
Sitting and begging
Is that the deal?
Why why,
Why won't he die?
Why can't you leave him
Why won't you try?
Why can't you see the
Lie in his eyes
Why does his laughter
Seem so like ice
Why does the answer
Scream and cry?
Why why why why why?
Holding on to
An exquisite pain
Over, and over
And over again
You always love him
You always care
He'll always @#%$ you
And never be there
Why do you hurt yourself
Why must you cry?
Come with me, darling
I'll show you the light
Why why,
Why don't I die?
I'm so obsessed with you
And I don't know why
Why is your body
Perfect and fine
Why is your beauty only
matched by your mind
Why do you love me
but never say why
Why?
WHY DOES THE HATRED WELL UP INSIDE
WHY DOES THE MAGIC NEVER SEEM FINE
WHY DOES THE LAUGHTER LOOK LIKE A LIE
Why???
WHY???
WHY???
WHY WHY WHY???
Cioden Darkeye
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Edited by: Falcon2001 at: 2/10/02 1:14:52 am
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Well whoever it is is an @#%$, Jess, if he thinks that...but that's my opinion
Great poem, like I told ya before.
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The Word:
I sat at the computer
And tried to think
Of all the things that you are
And what you mean to me
And I sat and I sat and I sat and I sat
And I still couldn’t think
Of a word or a phrase that IS you
And I kept on thinking until it hurt
So I
Stopped
And rethought it over
And thought about who you are:
You are lovelier than the starry sky
More precious to me than life
Your mind is keener than a knife
And your smile could melt a glacier
You are kinder than the healing hand
And serenity is your tool
You can relax me with a single word
And you’re so trusting and full of love
And you love me for just who I am…
I sat alone at the computer
Trying to think
About what word describes you most:
Is it love?
Is it life?
How about serene?
Or kind, wise, loving and everything else
All rolled into one?
I searched through the dictionary
Front to back , back to front
And I found the word
The word that tells me who you are
The word that shows the world
The word, the word, a simple word
But one so dear to me
The only word I ever found
That word, my dear is
Perfect
Cioden Darkeye
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Cioden tried to sneak in after the alchohol, but the Quill-Bearer belt-buckle he just bought screwed him over.
Turning from the large doorman, he brought out his sword and crossed himself. Spinning, he whacked the doorman across the side of the head, knocking him to the floor.
Alarms sounded, and Cioden muttered something to himself.
"Poop."
Running ahead, he flung sleep spells at all those who got in his way until he found Nyyark in his room. Smiling evilly, he drew out a long slim dagger with a ebon handle and a 3/4 foot steel blade only about an inch wide. Flipping it in the air, he drew out a piece of paper and threw it under the spinning knife.
Falling to the ground, the knife impaled the paper. Cioden smiled and spun around, kicking the knife. Paper and blade hurtled toward Nyyark at blinding speed. When he opened his eyes, he saw the knife sticking out of the the wall millimeters from his head.
Cioden cocked his head, laughed roguishly and grinned. "That's a greeting, Nyyark, and a good one it is too."
Turning, he dove headfirst into a shadow and dissapeared.
Nyyark pulled the knife out of the wall and folded it up. Scanning the note, he read the contents aloud.
"That knife's a present, boy, use it wisely. Also, I need to get in touch with you. silvertrip_2001@yahoo.com - Email me or I might come back."
"Your friend in the shadows, Cioden Darkeye"
OOC: Email me, Nyyark, I need to get in touch with you.
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Thank you Peredhil! BTW, it does flow for me, but the cool thing about about poems is that everyone sees it different. It's kind of a green day-ish one. Cioden Darkeye
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Go Nyyark!
Go Nyyark!
It's your birthday...er...no, it isn't.
But have some cake anyway!
Great poem!
Cioden Darkeye
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Mmmmmm...fishy...yum...
Great stuff!
Cioden Darkeye
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Regrettably enough, my posting of critiques and compliments as of late has been sporadic at best, but I am now attempting to make up for some of my error.
But anyway, great poem, Gwaihir! I don't see you often enough on #thepen to talk to you, but keep up the good work.
(Of course, you ARE a bard if I remember correctly. Of course your work is good.)
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It's early, but unfortunately this is the only time I have to view poems...but man, I almost missed out!
Great poem, Nyvark (That IS your name, right? Like I said, it's early) keep up the great works.
Cioden Darkeye
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Falcon walks onstage and looks around hesitantly, then clears his throat.
"Well, uh...uhm...yeah...I'm...reallyreallyexcitedaboutallthispromotionstuffandit'sreallycoolandyeahandthankyouall!"
Falcon steps down, bows and shuffles out with the news
Cioden Darkeye
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A two part song
in Banquet Room Archives
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First point: Yeah, I'm over you. I've been over you for a while.
Second point: Duh you love that oaf. I think I noticed somewhere along the line.
Third point: I don't need your friendship. I've got friends, and I think attempting suicide SEVEN TIMES is more than enough trying. BTW, attempting is making the action and failing. Three loose knots, three dull blades, and one missed slice.
Yes you were there, but not always. That's the only thing I ask of a friend, is that they always be there. Of course, to date, I've only ever had ONE person fulfill that, but that's another story.
I thank you for the conversations and listening to me, but I'm not going after you. In time you will see what I meant. And if you don't, then it's your loss, not mine.
When you decide to grow up and become more patient and less throw-a-fit-ey, then come on back and we'll welcome you with open arms. Until then, do whatever you want.
Oh, and happy 11-month Anniversary.
Cioden Darkeye
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