whynotsin Posted June 8, 2003 Report Share Posted June 8, 2003 here we go my first real post in forever ____-----_____------_____-------______------____---____---__ Leaves fall through the haze Into subtle puddles Muddled and gray. Into the eternity The ether And time, A place of a one-time rime Where lost children Watched for home Like falling angles leaves crash Splashing softly inside of the past Falling away becoming mud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Illianna Wolfsong Posted June 9, 2003 Report Share Posted June 9, 2003 Wow... Thank you, Whynot. That was truly pleasurable to read. I had to savor it 3 times before pausing to reply. I'm going back to savor again. Your words are fluid, your imagery romantic, and the poem is as graceful as the leaves themselves. Thank you for painting such a vivid and beautiful picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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