whynotsin Posted May 23, 2003 Report Share Posted May 23, 2003 “Carla Cla” Carla Cla, I hear your name and I think. Rejection and pain But that’s ok. It’s your choice Not mine. I see you and it’s torment, Though you may not see, The inner turmoil, I must face. Before I proposed the question my mind was torn asunder By the anticipation of rejection, And after the fact my heart was torn to pieces, But that’s ok its not your fault. In my mind I set my self up. I knew all along you’d say no. They always do. No real surprise on my part, I should have known more then to trust myself. To rely on the heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smallscale_mind_games Posted May 23, 2003 Report Share Posted May 23, 2003 The last two lines seem to contradict the rest. I am confused (but that may just be the cough medicine). Nicely written though. I like your style. *considerately runs away to cough up a lung somewhere else* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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