Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Ozymandias the Elder The Founder Posts: 628 (4/30/02 5:17:58 pm) Reply Auction of the Soul -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Your rhythm and word choice flow very much like Shel Silverstein's. A fact that enhances the poem quite well with just the right feel of whimsical otherworldliness that is all the more familiar and serious because of it. You paint a very important, stark message that reads like one out of some of the better novels I've read. Kudos, Xr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Xradion Honored Guest Posts: 13 (5/1/02 9:59:11 pm) Reply Re: Auction of the Soul -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks a lot! I actually wasn't sure if I should post it or not, because it was one of the earlier poems I wrote (I became more interested in poetry this year when I traveled to Chile and studies several Latin American poets, so this is really the first year I attempt to right poetry seriously), but your comments have re-affirmed this post. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Ozymandias the Elder The Founder Posts: 641 (5/2/02 4:59:24 pm) Reply Re: Auction of the Soul -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm glad to help. :>) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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