Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Bhurin Initiate Posts: 16 (1/1/02 12:50:50 pm) Reply Shattered Night -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Banquet Hall Nyyark First off, let me say that I loved your continuous use of metaphors and personifacation throughout this piece. Few people would (or could) write a poem with nearly all of its devices sewn in metaphor. When I started reading this poem, I feared that it would be about a reused message (that of hope and endurance), but the style in which you presented it was subtle and well phrased. I greatly enjoyed this piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 peredhil31 Elder of Lists and Manners Posts: 756 (1/1/02 6:25:31 pm) Reply ezSupporter Shattered Night -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Very Nicely done. I agree with Bhurin. Note, you need an apostrophe in sun's in the line Quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- the suns burning -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Again, well done. -P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Gyrfalcon25 Bard Posts: 152 (1/1/02 10:50:00 pm) Reply Re: Shattered Night -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *applauds* I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 gwaihir1 Poet Posts: 62 (1/2/02 1:58:21 pm) Reply Re: Shattered Night -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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