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Foe Calibur

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(12/27/01 1:12:27 am)

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Written in true Bhurin style I may say. Well done my friend, well done.

 

When the poem was read the atmosphere was perfect, the words illustrated, very adequately, an air of mystery, just enough to add to what we had assumed. Nobody knew, but everybody guessed. None believed but none turned away. Everyone was questioning, no one had answers, it was perfect.

 

Shi ga ii desu!

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peredhil31

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(12/27/01 7:21:28 am)

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Good FRP poem. Always nice to translate play to poetry.

 

Welcome and keep it up!

 

Zips away to resend the passwords, pricked by a posted comment in another thread.

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Bhurin

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(12/28/01 11:57:08 pm)

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Foe-san. Arigato watashi no ii tomadachi desu.

 

Took me a moment to find this place.. But I think I've got the layout now.

 

(Now if I could just find the lavatory)...

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