Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Minta Rose Bard Posts: 47 (12/13/01 2:33:56 am) Reply Reformed, Part I -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (by Gwaihir, Assembly Room) Tumbling tripping words, like a diary hastily written--like a person with more important manners occupying his mind--the sentence fragments and extremely short paragraphs make this effect. There is a shift of tense between the parts; the first is a flashback, the second a diary of constant snippets of the present. Each piece flows cohesively, and stands alone as well as tying to a greater arc. It could end at either part and not leave the reader unsatisfied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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