Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 This is well written-- I especially liked the fact that you took the time to introduce the history behind the story by having the main character think back on it, with items that take him back then-- a daydreaming sort of style, rather than just use a prologue to get people what they need to know. Kept my interest throughout. Well written, Brute. Continue! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Brute3: thanks! Praise is always good. I'm glad you enjoyed the way I wrote it. There is much I would like to have included, such as a much greater detailed description of the valley, the house, Jarom, Jarom's history (actually, that'll be touched on a bit more soon), and so forth, but the need for brevity won. Anyway...thanks for reading it. I hope that I can continue to hold your interest. Brute O Drunken One Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2003 Yui Temae: Argh! It's at the top of the must-read list, Brute-dear. I'm sorry that I haven't had the time to get to your long-awaited story before now, but I'll be sure to give you all the praise you deserve when I've finally gotten to read it! Impatiently, ~Yui-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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