Guest Tyrunn Alberyn Posted June 10, 2002 Report Share Posted June 10, 2002 For sure, I am a mortal, I will, come to an end. Eternal life, it's not for me, I know, I want to live. Amazing pain, or painlessly sleep in, bring my, oblivion in due time. Reaching for, the life I've had, I am afraid of what's to come. --- Ok, back for this one post... I've been seriously ill the last few weeks, and sort of still am... I'll try to be back with you people as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted June 10, 2002 Report Share Posted June 10, 2002 This is great! The internal rhyme scheme in the third stanza strikes me as particularly vivid. Kudos to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted June 10, 2002 Report Share Posted June 10, 2002 Grappling with our own mortality is one pole in the ancient paradox of opening ourselves to joy and life while facing certain pain and destruction. Very well written. Hope you are feeling better soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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