Falcon2001 Posted June 3, 2002 Report Share Posted June 3, 2002 I'm writing this song to... I'm writing this song to... I'm writing this song to express A feeling I cannot suppress The ways of the world are obscure And it seems that there's never a cure The things nobody dared to do The way I didn't dare to look at you The dreams nobody dared to dream The wish that never dared to gleam The sun that never dared to shine The seer that never dared to divine The truth that no one dared to see The lies that no one dared to be These things that were never dared to do Dare to dream, I say to you Dare to do the things undone Dare to win the prizes unwon Dare to be the perfect girl Dare to find the treasured pearl Dare to dream the dreams undreamt Dare to straighten what is bent Dare to tell the truth untold Dare to expose the lie so gold These things that no one dared to do Dare these things, I say to you! Stop your falling and find your truth Live your life and enjoy your youth But don't give up, please try again Break the cycle, shatter the chain Dare to dream, dare to fly Dare to ask the reason why Dare to be the flying bird Dare to be the written word Dare to do these things, I say Dare to be, and sieze the day Dare to be stronger Dare to be smarter Dare to be silent Dare to be loud Dare to be something But whatever you choose Whatever is your cup of tea Do one thing: Dare to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted June 4, 2002 Report Share Posted June 4, 2002 *Gyrfalcon applauds* Heh, good points to whoever you wrote this poem for. It has a definite sense of rhythm to it, which I liked a lot. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted June 4, 2002 Report Share Posted June 4, 2002 I get a new sense of purpose reading this, like its written on a signpost at the beginning of a long journey. It not only tells you to be, but it tells you to be the BEST you can be, to be yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nyyark Posted June 4, 2002 Report Share Posted June 4, 2002 I like it, your writing definatly shows improvement. Kepp up the good work Falc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Xradion Posted June 4, 2002 Report Share Posted June 4, 2002 Well done. I don't really have much to add to what's already been said. I thought the repetition worked very well. I also appreciated the message. Keep it up! Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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