Guest Jess Posted May 9, 2002 Report Share Posted May 9, 2002 The fires of hell are burning; You tried to make me see. It hurt so much, To hear it from your lips; To hear the insanity and pain. I couldn't understand. I wanted to take it all away. Now you're gone; I don't have to listen. I don't have to hear you say, That hells fires burn black. I don't have to see, That look in your eyes, And worry that you're slipping away. I don't have to beg you, To show that you love me. It doesn't hurt when you say no. I can't see, That you don't want me, And it no longer galls, When you look away. Now you're gone, And the only thing I can think, Is how much I miss you, How much I love you, How much I want you back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted May 9, 2002 Report Share Posted May 9, 2002 *Gyrfalcon applauds* No, I've not forgotten about ye. =) I'm glad to see you back and posting such excellent poetry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Xradion Posted May 9, 2002 Report Share Posted May 9, 2002 The "your" in line 14 should read "you're." (Sorry, I feel like being a picky, anal-retentive bastard tonight for some strange reason ). Edit this post, and you will make me look like an even greater fool for having said this. Good poem, though. I enjoyed it. *An enduring flame sits atop a spent candle, the wick having long since burned out, and the wax having melted away.* Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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