Watch it.

[Rahsash Geldich]

I see her silver tears

Running down her face.

I will tend to her fears

While you and I race.

 

'Cause I can't stand to see her cryin'

Its as if her soul is dying!

How can you look into her blackened eyes

While smiling at her pleading cries?

Your damn damage cannot be repaired!

You've broken her spirit, gotten her scared.

 

Her eyes are hollow

And her voice is too.

Throat too hoarse to swallow,

And she loves you?

 

I want to pull that out

The way you yanked her pride.

I'm going to make you shout,

Make you run and hide.

 

'Cause I can't stand to see her cryin'

Its as if her soul is dying!

You are the cause of blackened eyes,

Oblivious to her pain-filled cries.

Your wall breaking cannot be repaired

And for that you should be scared.

 

Be prepared for broken bones,

'Cause torture I prefer.

I'll ignore your agonized moans

For what you did to her!

 

You may have pushed her all around,

Hurt her in hell-derived ways.

But the day I get ahold of you,

You'll wish for the end of your days!

[Falcon2001]

*Applause of the highest accord*

 

I fully understand the emotion behind this one, as I've felt this way too many times to count. Oh well. I just flew back from orlando and boy are my arms tired!

 

*Drum shot*

 

...okay, i'm done.

 

Good poem, and keep up the goo-......

 

*Falls asleep on computer keyboard*

Cioden Darkeye

 

Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

President of the Peredhil Fan Club

Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses

Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II

Council - The Hunters - Blitz II

Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

[Guest Lord Seth Exodus]

Seth sits in quiet contemplation. "Hum! 'Tis a thought, indeed. That wish you wish, and wish you weren't. Very good! Bravo!

 

~For the record, Falcon, it's a rim-shot~

 

-Seth exodus

Initiate of The Pen