Guest Heart Like A Hole Posted March 12, 2002 Report Share Posted March 12, 2002 another heart i find littered at my feet, discarded in favor of a razor one more long since cold her lips are blue and her hands are stiff i stare blankly incapable of feeling anything but sorrow at the tears frozen to the side of her face one more long since cold sister...sister...sister... the fire in your eyes is stolen by another morning all alone wake up in bed but you're really dead you smoke a cigarette smile like the rest but i'm not oblivious to the razor's kiss you've tried so hard to hide you've grown cold from ages of neglect and a soul's worth of regret you turned your back you turned your back and now you're not moving anymore one more long since cold sister...sister...sister... take me with you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted March 12, 2002 Report Share Posted March 12, 2002 I really enjoyed this poem, and felt a lot of emotion coming from it...which isn't really saying all that much because all of your work is HIGHLY emotional, drawing the reader into it. Keep up the good work! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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