Guest Heart Like A Hole Posted March 7, 2002 Report Share Posted March 7, 2002 a handful of photographs see it? the girl stands, resting her head upon his chest, she can still remember the way it felt to breathe his breath they couldn't feel the cold from where they were standing intense grey eyes peer through the film as though he's still there a piece of him claimed in the picture for her to keep by her side he doesn't know it, but he's captured the girl as much as the twilight through the lens she is his, and oh so proudly she is not smiling, but oh, love is there too he's captured the girl and she could ask for no better fate there is no cold where they're standing see it? they aren't smiling but you can see, if you stare that love is there, too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted March 8, 2002 Report Share Posted March 8, 2002 *smiles smugly at the other pen members* SEE! Now who else could write something with this...this... *Waves arms around, looking for a word* ...incredibly cool stuff. Yeah, that'll have to do. Anyway, I'm amazed again at your vividity (Is that a word?) and imagery in this...wonderful use of words in this. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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