reverie Posted November 25, 2002 Report Share Posted November 25, 2002 written as a gift... 21nov02 Flicker When you sing that silly song A quarter’s lapse has come and gone. Counting Candles, oh so bright Seen to rival, a star-field night. Set in flame, you face enframed. Do not dismay, these daunting rays. Within each flame, a scene will show The time you know, from flicker to glow… revery the dreamlost "time cannot be stopped nor revived" the dream continues... Edited by: reverie at: 11/25/02 7:40:38 am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted November 27, 2002 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2002 oh thanx... oh since your curious, the person i wrote it for just turned 25... and they enjoyed too... revery the dreamlost "lo,lo,lo pal" the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoaringIcarus Posted November 28, 2002 Report Share Posted November 28, 2002 When you said "a quarter's lapse" do you mean in a sports event, such as a football game? Otherwise, I was contemplating how $.25 passed during a silly song. I hope the reciever enjoyed the poem. Good. -Icarus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wordphoole Posted December 7, 2002 Report Share Posted December 7, 2002 NIcely done. A sweet and thoughtful gift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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