WrenWind Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 (edited) It takes only a moment,a whisper of time A word once released can not be retracted And everything changes Time does not heal all. It festers and and inflames One small mistake becomes something insurmountable And everything ends No regrets,no worries is not very realistic If onlys and appologies won't fix anything And everyone lies Edited January 9, 2010 by WrenWind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Strangely I seem to able to relate to this piece. Disclosing the truth can be dangerous and yes, we all lie, if by definition you include lies of omission. The words I have chosen often carry one meaning for me and once read are interpreted in an entirely different way than it was intended. You have a few small mechanical errors in the piece Wrenwind but the feels are strong and the message for me clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Strangely I seem to able to relate to this piece. Disclosing the truth can be dangerous and yes, we all lie, if by definition you include lies of omission. The words I have chosen often carry one meaning for me and once read are interpreted in an entirely different way than it was intended. You have a few small mechanical errors in the piece Wrenwind but the feels are strong and the message for me clear. I would love you to pooint out the mechanical errors please Thanks for your imput Regel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Just a small spelling thing Wren and I am sure your P key is sticking. appologies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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