Kikuyu_Black_Paws Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Blue is a color: Lurking around corners, Under doors and rooftops— Even to the point of silence....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 The first time I read this I didn't even notice the BLUE (I'm slow, in waves...) outline. I think there would be a greater emphasis on 'point of silence' if you ended with a single period. A more jarring finality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikuyu_Black_Paws Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Thanks Loki. That's an interesting concept..I didn't think about the abrupt. I thought more of a hiss, but the stop kind of fits the blue better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Degorram Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 I must say this is a new style for you. You pulled it off. Tis well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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