Finnius Posted February 24, 2007 Report Share Posted February 24, 2007 Fluffy soft and pointy teeth, Tapered ears and tail, Banded rings and racoon stripes, Howling, wolven wail - Walking contradtions seem, To be your stock in trade, But when you look just close enough, You're sunshine with no shade; A bounding, nipping tackle, When I always need them most, And a warm and caring shoulder, So to you I raise this toast - You're a kind a loving friend, (And the reason why I'm blue,) So tumbly fun tanuki-chan, This poem's just for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katzaniel Posted February 24, 2007 Report Share Posted February 24, 2007 Awww! That's so awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeldrinHor Posted February 25, 2007 Report Share Posted February 25, 2007 (edited) Very nice rhyme and meter. Flows very well. Story like quality is abundant without being syrupy. Excellently done! Edited February 25, 2007 by GeldrinHor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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