WrenWind Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 (edited) Whiskey Kiss it was just a kiss soft and tentative one kiss one taste and I am lost in love confused happy it was just a kiss Edited January 31, 2007 by WrenWind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted January 31, 2007 Report Share Posted January 31, 2007 I enjoyed the book end comments "It was just a kiss" It starts and ends the sentiment very well. In the middle the word choice seems very appropriate but if I might suggest one more to go with and I am lost inlove confused happy It would simply be "alive" Nice to see you writing again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted January 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2007 Whiskey Kiss the bottle is still full smooth liquid amber one glass one taste and i am lost in love confused numb the bottle is still full a different twist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quincunx Posted January 31, 2007 Report Share Posted January 31, 2007 Kaw. Krrrrrrrrraw. Jemmy's apple's caught in his craw but he don't sound quite like that. He don't pick at the shingles. He strips them off clean, never dropped moss and mold into my glass. O Mary, mother of us all, Send us a woman with warm lips, Send us someone who won't shudder at a crow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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