gjunon Posted May 7, 2005 Report Share Posted May 7, 2005 Life ever changing. A drop of water Casting a shadow on my life Faded memories passing through the distance Should I still try Twilight has come This is the only path in sight I know not where it leads, but I must keep walking I am scared, I will be nothing, yet I still cry Darkness has settled I cannot see the path to walk, yet my legs still tread on Where this path leads I do not know Should I embrace it or hide, only time will tell my fate have not been around for some time but now i am here and yeah enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted May 19, 2005 Report Share Posted May 19, 2005 It seems that you're courageous enough to chose a path, and that's already worth a big round of applause. Because while it might feel secure to stand still where you are, in the end change is necesary to grow. The way you have left space between the lines makes the reader take his time to read every line as a separate item. This slowed down the reading, but at the same time made me more aware of what I was reading. and yeah, I did enjoy Sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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