Gryphon Posted April 10, 2005 Report Share Posted April 10, 2005 Perspective ~~~ As I walk, The world creeps sideways, In the street lamps light, To hide behind a tree. The commuter: ~~~ I lie in wait, This morning, The bus is my natural prey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted April 10, 2005 Report Share Posted April 10, 2005 I like these, they're clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted April 10, 2005 Report Share Posted April 10, 2005 HeHe Very cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerulean Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 Hi Gryphon, I love poetic vignettes, so I enjoyed reading these. I especially liked your line: The world creeps sideways - great image. C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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