DarkPainInside Posted March 12, 2004 Report Share Posted March 12, 2004 forgive me if this is crap....i havent written propperly in ages.... Freedom is something You can’t obtain Just by wishing and Staying the same With one swipe of her hand, The writing was gone, And with that movement She knew she didn’t belong. The punch for the boy Was just a confirmation That they hated him; A victim of alienation The bruise on the cheek Was just a sign That she couldn’t pay Her debt in time The rope on the rafters Was a cry for need And it came too late; For done was the deed Freedom is something You can’t obtain Just by wishing and Staying the same… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morbid Angel Posted March 12, 2004 Report Share Posted March 12, 2004 i liked this! very emotional and heart felt. Nice JOb Morbid Angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackCagedHeart Posted March 12, 2004 Report Share Posted March 12, 2004 For some odd reason, when I read this I felt a weird fuzzy feeling....then I walked outside and killed something. BlackCagedHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkPainInside Posted March 15, 2004 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2004 thanx morbid and BCH!!!!! very encouraging!!!!!! (if not a little odd!! ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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