Guest Morbid Angel Posted March 10, 2004 Report Share Posted March 10, 2004 The heavy, empty, blackness sits there, It tears at me, making me not care. It just sits there, making me feel physically sick, Makes my internal bomb begin to tick. In the back of my throat it decides to stay, There's nothing I can do to make it go away. I've tried everything that I know how to do, I even tried turning to you. When I lie awake at night, I remember all the things I didn't do right. I wish I could go to sleep! But all I am capable of, is a silent weep. From this day forth, I promise myself, That I will not do anymore damage to my health. I will take care of it, once and for all. So I can stop myself from having one final fall. Never again, will I let it defeat me, Never again, will I be incapable of being able to see. Never again, Will I ever feel this black pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted March 10, 2004 Report Share Posted March 10, 2004 ... that hurt.. but never stop believing. *wan smile* it's just that I cant even remember how often I told myself the same things... for me it doesn't work long enough unfortunatly, I hope that it will for you *hugs* Some small edit: lye = lie in the 1st sentence of the 3rd stanza And how about calling it 'Black Hole'? Well written, thanks for sharing and take care *hugs again* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkPainInside Posted March 11, 2004 Report Share Posted March 11, 2004 hey Morbid, u handed this into o'sullivan?!??!! damn its so good but she'll flip!! nice one.... luv ya! CD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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