disizmrkent Posted February 17, 2004 Report Share Posted February 17, 2004 You are deeply hated, just as I am deeply jaded. Why is it your love is gone? Why has all of it now faded? Why am I now forsaken? My heart stomped, after taken. Why do I fell so empty? My heart is broken, yet still breaking. You were something special to me, but never took the time to see; That I did love you, just as I said, insanley, madly, deeply. Now our hearts are all out, love wasted. I know you're gone forever, I've faced it. But the one thing I miss above all, Is your kiss, and how it tasted. So now I leave you, so deep in sorrow. I may seek your love, today or tomorrow. But the last thing I say to you in parting; give me back the heart you borrowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonqueen Posted February 17, 2004 Report Share Posted February 17, 2004 Pretty cool poem. I just had to post and say how much I loved these two lines: My heart is broken, yet still breaking. and give me back the heart you borrowed. Great poem. Even better the second time I read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted February 25, 2004 Report Share Posted February 25, 2004 Very good poem i really enjoyed it! I love the way you were able to portray the emotion so clearly something i find kinda hard to do myself but you seemed to have no problem with it!! "My heart is broken, yet still breaking" Thats my favorite line! Excellent poem hun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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