Savage Dragon Posted January 26, 2004 Report Share Posted January 26, 2004 We danced, what a dance We kissed, what a kiss but its her soft eyes That I most miss Because as the dancing stopped The music faded away I looked in her eyes And then ran away I loved her soft hair I loved her sweet voice I loved her deep eyes But I hate my choice So as she fades away And becomes part of my past She herself is gone But her memory lasts So please do not dismiss this Pass it to people that you know So that my darling may one day Know that I feel so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Kokoro Posted January 28, 2004 Report Share Posted January 28, 2004 I really enjoyed this. Nice rhythm and I loved the end, the request that it be circulated in the hopes that it will reach her. I love the romantic and optimistic viewpoint, as well as the implied intention to wait as long as necessary to find her again. Very sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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