Loki Wyrd Posted December 13, 2003 Report Share Posted December 13, 2003 *copy/pasted* Ok, so I'm stoned. So I'm going to try and construct a poem for you folks. Here goes... I'm breathing flames To die another time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Shit...that was pretty good, for a start at least (at least in my stoned mind). Sounds like something that would be good for a anti-pot commercial. D'oh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted December 13, 2003 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2003 .... Why do this to yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Taken by yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Forget about you You drunken fool Troubled by youth You are denial Remember the pain From all that you are Troubled by fear Wearing its scar Always remember Who that you are Troubled and here No matter how far It's getting longer...and now I'm writing it for this forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted December 13, 2003 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2003 Choices made are past And presently to come Seldom comes my way But I'm not yet done When I come to rest Is anyone's guess I can only hope That's your best When I come to To my delight I can only hope For the coming night el fin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted December 13, 2003 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2003 The work in its whole: I'm breathing flames To die another time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Why do this to yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Taken by yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Forget about you You drunken fool Troubled by youth You are denial Remember the pain From all that you are Troubled by fear Wearing its scar Always remember Who that you are Troubled and here No matter how far Choices made are past And presently to come Seldom comes my way But I'm not yet done When I come to rest Is anyone's guess I can only hope That's your best When I come to To my fright I can only hope For the coming night el fin I changed the second line, last stanza. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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