Wylde

I do know that the rhyming changes but that is what i wanted to do , thank you for your suggestions

Wylde

Nicely done ,i've heard this one before im sure from you , and i agree it is a little annoying but it is not my style of writing

*hugs* talk to ya soon Wylde

Your words turn to poisen ,

they infect my soul

but i have still risen,

and must become whole

The path you have chose ,

has crushed my heart

like a dying rose,

I was torn apart

I tried to change my love,

but my mind was frozen

so i picked up this pen,

and tried to rise above

but through it all ,

you've offered my protection

a lot of love and affection,

but still my heart does fall

Wylde

All the sudden the door opens loudly ,and in walks a slender red headed woman in a black dress . She shakes her hair wildely to get the rain out . She walks up to the Bar keep .

Bar keep pass me an ale..

No my name doesnt refer to oscar wilde , i just spell wild differently and i like it

Wylde

I loved your poem as i was reading it it reminded me of my friend and I , and it really made me think about it

Wylde

Thank you for your suggestion , it means a lot to me . I'm new at writing poems so any help i cant get is great

Wylde

Through these eyes

I see your soul

With my dispise

My hate grows whole

In my voice

You hear my pain

Now it's your choice

To pick in vane

It's time to decide

Do i continue to hate

My heart has died

But i still do wait

Wylde