T)emon13laT)e

Sorry for not attending the site as of late. Anyways, here are my three latests poems.

 

Exacerbate

 

These tears still dampen my face

The pain will never erase

Not much has changed

Just a small mental note for my brain

I guess I’m hoping for too much

Every night I dream of your touch

 

Confusion seems to enjoy its stay

I wish it wouldn’t last another day

All this shit is driving me insane

I try to save myself all in vain

I’ve lied to myself once more

In the end, I’m the one you abhor

 

The pain I feel must be intoxicating

It seems I’m not the only one it is infecting

If only I were a stoic champion

Maybe then we wouldn’t have met this conclusion

I was a fool to believe this would endure

For this heart, there is no cure.

 

Eternity’s Gift

 

A whirlpool of misery

Grown from the seas I stir.

A burning fire

Consuming all within reach.

 

The pain I feel

I use to slake the fires.

Is all but subsiding,

A black residue,

A dark trail of shame.

 

From out of the ruins

A new bird is born.

A soul; a spirit made anew.

In my eyes a new fire burns-

The flames of rebirth,

Forever it strives.

 

Tantalizing my every sense,

The sensation of life plays with my mind.

Is this real?

Is this the truth?

Or have I been led

Like a blind cow to the slaughter

Is this my only purpose?

To wait for impending doom?

Or is there something more,

To this meaningless existence?

 

I am lost in the void,

A void deep within my mind.

When shall I find salvation?

When will I find my way out?

 

 

Eternity’s Curse

 

Through fire and ice, destruction and creation

A soul remains, untouched by this world’s corruption.

Buried under layers of lies far from reach.

 

The one you see is the truth,

Quietly building walls around myself

To shelter everyone else but me.

 

I am not afraid of the outside world.

I do not hide from this whole new realm.

Instead, I hide from my own worst enemy.

Dare I learn the truth of me?

Dare I embrace it with open arms?

The answer I often shy away from

For I like the one I see.

 

I care little for human attention.

I care little for their grace.

This is what I have become,

A being that sheds tears for none.

I guess the rigors of time have changed my heart.

I guess this is all a lie as well.

For many still grace my existence,

And I thank them by continuing this life.

I wish to see my life slip from hands

Just to see who really cares.

 

I have seemingly grown up in the dark,

And what’s pure seems to slip from my grasp.

Now I erupt with unholy fury,

Seeking vengeance on my defiler.

It does get annoying having to type my name over and over.... which is why i dont expect you to do it. I'v egotten used to it because i use it as a password for another forum.

 

Oh yeah... email addy :-D Demon13lade@msn.com

Corruption

 

In the dark shadows

Where I like to hide,

Is a small, dark corner

Where I reside.

 

I can no longer bear the truth,

And conceive the fate of this world.

‘Tis a thought I’ve given up on;

I’ve no hope to be unfurled.

 

As complete as this world can be

It remains a desolate abode.

I’ll let this world burn in hell;

In the dark I shall erode.

Untitled

 

You fill the emptiness which was once in my heart

You make me complete- without you I’d be lost

Every hour I think of you tirelessly

I can’t get my mind off of you

Is there something wrong with me?

I like to believe it’s just you

To me you are the most precious thing in this world

I’d do anything to keep you happy

And I’ll give you anything you need

But sometimes I can’t help but wonder

Am I truly what you need?

 

 

Its actually titled Untitled.... think about it

I'm a little single minded but... Oh well. I'd hav to say my girlfriend.

A Demon We Are Forced to Keep

 

A monster contained within this sanctuary

Feeding off the hapless victims caught within

‘Tis a trap cleverly devised to trap the weak

 

Many parish at the hands of this demon

And many survive and seek to help others

 

The world is caught within a maelstrom

A plague we have brought upon ourselves

Unwillingly, we have plotted our demise

A friend

 

It seems we have seen the same things before

I have felt like I held something to abhor

Never have I seen such an atrocity

Until I had found a mirror and found me

I’ll be your friend and help you find what you have lost

Your true self, the one which comes without the high cost

 

Just listen to me and every word I say

Instead of ignoring what could be a great day

No one wants to live a life that has gone askew

Which is why I am here to help you

I’ll try to be a friend and listen to your every cry

Just as long you have nothing to deny

 

I do not ask you to forgive and forget

And try not to forget the path you’ve trekked

Instead embrace your past and use it to grow

Become what you want and learn what you know

I am your friend and I’ll be here for you

And I’ll always be there to help you through

 

 

comments?

Very simple and yet affective... I like Kitties... but Kuchigusos and cabbits are much much better... LEAVE ME ALONE!

 

Ahem... Tell anyone of this an I shall surely sever your head from the rest of your body.

 

On a side note: THE RHYMES ARE GOOD! O_o They dont sound forced-like.

*clap*

 

I like it. Reminds me of me... Only my girlfriend is always busy so I dont see her much.

=(

 

I find it strange how couples can kiss openly in public. I can't with my girlfriend. Just too many people around. Plus, our school has something against PDA's...

I like the first one. I dton see anything wrong with it. Rhythm is good and NO FORCED RHYMES! (Doesn't like rhymes much) The second poem needs a little work on the rhythm. Its still good though. I like the words you used like: catalyst, cocoon, etc.

Well, one thing is the rhyming. All the rhyming seems forced so I dont really like it. I would say only to use a rhyme when it comes naturally and doesn't stick out. Other than that, Its good.

Oblivion

 

Is it a soul lost in oblivion?

Or a soul hidden within your conscious?

A thought unwilling to be processed

A thought needing the attention

Its soul roams the mind free

Its haunting presence is a joy like no other

 

It wrangles with the mind just to seek the truth

Its insecurities bring the hauntings

A pain to breathe in this oblivion

Utter chaos- is this deserving?

Lost in eternity and unworthy of time

Was eternity meant to be a hell?

 

A Flickering Fire

 

Burning fervently in the mind

A fire constantly being fed

A fire dim at times

Always burning nonetheless

 

‘Tis a fire that requires a kindle

This kindle is a rainstorm

Why does it ne’er draw near?

Is it afraid to hurt the flames?

 

The rain may deceive these flames

And yet it brings unexpected growth

A flicker- burning bright and dim

The flames seem to be lost in dark

 

Oddly, rain lingers around the flames

The flames seldom hide from the rain

Maybe these flames are an illusion

These fires will burn, will the skies bring rain?

 

 

Two poems I wrote... the emotions I felt are mostly paranoia... unless my fears are true than... i dont know....

thnx for your comments! You are so right!

Archaneus showed me this site!

Praise be to Archaneus!

 

ahem...

 

LOVE THE SMILIES! :woot:

 

neways.... I've started a fan fic... but... I'm only on the 3rd chapter!

 

Master

 

As I delve into the answers I’ve sought long and hard

More questions arise, causing me to stray from my path.

What I now desire is unknown; I am my own master.

So I shall choose what I see fit for me, although,

It worries me for it may not be what I wish,

But all I wish is for the best.

I am my own master now; decide I must and soon the day shall come

For me to choose my fate.

A path of darkness, a path brimming with life.

These are what I’ve to choose from.

I know what I want but...

Why do I hesitate for these restraints?

Am I not ready to be the master?

 

Metamorphosis

 

I’ve stared into the mirror of my life long and hard,

And finally realized what I have been looking at.

I see myself;

Happy, nothing wrong.

The storm clouds have passed,

And the sun shines through

As I emerge from my cocoon.

 

I've finally changed,

And shall continue to change.

It is the inevitable that time brings,

But I hope my evolution will be for the better.

Time is all I have and yet,

It takes away from all I know.

And soon all will wither away.

 

For now, I will fight dearly

So I can just be with those I hold close.

I will try my hardest to enjoy what I have left;

Time and more change to undergo,

But there is still plenty left for me to take.

All I hope is to not act with greed and take too much for then…

All will be gone… and my metamorphosis the cause.

 

Nightfall

 

I reach forward and can not see my hand

The darkness is all I see

I’ll wait here though

Till the sun rises and dawn brings new life

But it is still night

Where I shall ponder in the darkness.

Ponder of when day will break

Ponder of when the waves shall crash

Wait, the day has ended…

If the day is gone…

Is nightfall all that is left now?

 

Black and White

The damned delve deeper into damnation.

The sacred seek the damned.

All that is holy is all but a vague image.

They leave too soon, without a trace.

The hopeless still seek hope,

But no one is there.

The sacred has vanished in search of the damned.

It is all so black and white.

And yet no one seems to understand.

 

Past

 

It seems this fate I’ve avoided for so long

Has decided to be cruel and force me to act.

I dare not leave what I love most,

But I dare not toss away what I hold so precious.

I spend hours upon days,

And the days turn to weeks

But I’ve not arrived at a conclusion.

If I do not act soon, I shall have to let my fate carry me away.

And put everything behind me in the past.

 

Better

 

What is this?

A world to live in

Or might it be hell.

How can I know?

In a world so corrupt.

It surpasses my mind

How people can so blindly

Throw their lives into the wind.

And not really know what they are doing.

 

How can we stop it?

We can not help it.

For we is I.

I stand alone in my endeavors.

And I watch over this corrupt land.

Waiting for something new.

Something bright.

Something that will show

The peoples of this nation.

How to live their lives.

How to achieve what they have sought so long;

The better man.