Guest Phoenix Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 i remember unwrapping flowers before the time when innocence was lost peeling layer upon layer until the centre, the magical answer unravelled before me like natures puzzlebox i would sit skirt ruched up between my knees hidden quiet between the trees watching parisioners mingle searching in the flowers for the beginning of things and envying them their certainty i learnt young how to pretend how to bend the knee, and please say please, and curtsey oh so cutely and dimples would spread and candy be thrown while in the meantime behind the shutters i would watch them distainfully and disown furled around myself in my secret place in full view, but secret-held i would concentrate on the minutiae hoping that somewhere in the smelly mess of broken petals and seeds i would find the _why_ of the flower a logic i never found in the large building which swallowed my voice whole and left me wondering after my soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver WInd Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 I really like this, I think the first two stanzas are my faveorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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