wintumn Posted March 2, 2004 Report Share Posted March 2, 2004 24 search lights dazzled the sea (searching for cinderella's lost shoe) The pier (population: question mark) cried out, Where's D? To make her magic corn cake muffins? In the broken down diner breaking (#2) yellow pencils in his right hand and drinking coffee from a cracked ( I heart NY) mug he sat his salt sea eyes saw her curly q writing first (messy handwriting scribbled) on a coffee stained countertop and her "fresh pie" smile made his day (a la mode) In the night by her car keys clanked (wet concrete) Ribbons of drenched neon lit the (parking lot) stage butterfly wings, candle flames (unseen tears) And a silver charm falls to the ground 24 search lights dazzled the sea (searching for cinderella's lost shoe) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purple_shadows Posted March 3, 2004 Report Share Posted March 3, 2004 Kinda reminds me of something Francesca Lia Block would write. good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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