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ooo your still here tass... nicely done btw http://www.themightypen.net/public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/smile.gif

well done

the sea is full of life but none that you can see from the surface. you have to look deeper to find it. when your looking at the sea you really dont feel life you more feel alone. i dunno the anology seemed to work alright the poems for me were written to help me move on from a relationship that went sour... i had to realize that it is for the best to move on and let it all go.

sign me up

i agree with rev no matter how hard you try how much you sacrifice things will never be what you want them to be perhaps its time to look else where?

to be lost is to not know yourself. you must first know yourself before trying to know others. it is a hard lesson to learn one that took me a long time and a painfull one

to love is to trust that person not to hurt you.

i hope all is well but if your writing this perhaps not

to be tied to some one elses emotions is to be put on a rollor coaster you never know what is going to happen best of luck to you.

in other words i liked the poem good job

Life.

A drop of water

Casting a shadow on my life

Faded memories passing through the distance

Should I still try

Twilight has come

This is the only path in sight

I know not where it leads, but I must keep walking

I am scared, I will be nothing, yet I still cry

Darkness has settled

I cannot see the path to walk, yet my legs still tread on

Where this path leads I do not know

Should I embrace it or hide, only time will tell my fate

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The cold grass on my bare feet

The moonlight streaming down

Blurring the stars in the black ocean of time

How long have I been walking?

How much hurt I feel

Tears are flowing freely now

I don’t give a shit

Let them flow enough to hide from myself

Let it blure my past so I can focus on my future

I hurt so much its more than I can bear

I wont give up

I cant

My life is worth living still yet I have no direction

God I need you here with me more than ever

Since no one else is

I am all alone in my pain

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the waves crash

the sea beckons

time moves on without you

can i continue to live on

pain agony defeat this is how i feel

my burdon rings true to my heart

only you can answer

will you heed to my pleas

i believe the emptyness of the sea

is all that will call back to me

tears start to flow

the end of my time with you grows dark

im so cold

Life ever changing.

A drop of water

Casting a shadow on my life

Faded memories passing through the distance

Should I still try

Twilight has come

This is the only path in sight

I know not where it leads, but I must keep walking

I am scared, I will be nothing, yet I still cry

Darkness has settled

I cannot see the path to walk, yet my legs still tread on

Where this path leads I do not know

Should I embrace it or hide, only time will tell my fate

have not been around for some time but now i am here and yeah enjoy.

thanks for posting this.

Finally decided to finish it.

Droplets of sunshine pouring down from heaven

Cascading down trickling through the trees

Splashing onto your cool skin

Walking along the pathway to your heart

Walking with you now

How many ways can I tell her I love her

She is my center my rock my defining image

Nothing else seems to matter

The sunlight pouring over your face

The wind gently tugging at your hair

Your beauty more than I can ever take in

It is almost more than I can bear

Always there for me

Never wavering or faltering

Your love pouring out for me

Now it is my turn to say I love thee

i got somthing along the lines of a dream perhaps one where the country is without its capitol and everyone is celebrating??? anyhow deep poem

not nessisarily a better answer but another one indeed or maybe a shoulder to lean on ? ahh where is that going lol great poem

the glass means alot that it is shattered i hope things get better (they most always do )

a very well written peace lots of raw emotions good job i like it they way it is

hmmm hummm ehhhhh errrrrrrrrr well i liked the poem you did a good job telling how your inner spirit felt nice....

Alone I am

Sagging heavy on my shoulders

My burden rings true to my heart

Walking the solemn path alone

Where did it all start?

Thousands of tears I’ve cried

Not one can quench my pain

Will I ever find the right one?

Is there a person out there or are all my hopes in vain

My feet hurt my bones ache

Another tear falls to the ground

Traveling so long searching for my one and only love

My boots hitting the cold asphalt is the only audible sound

I know now I am destined to be alone

My candle already a quarter spent

Looking through out my years

Now I know I am going to take the hint

Looking down the road not a soul in sight

As far as the eye can see I am empty now

I start to walk away my burden growing with every step I take

Another tear falls from my cheek all I can think is how

That’s when I see you standing there

Your image is the only thing in my mind

I must be dreaming, have I found the one?

She is ever so kind

Only time will tell I say

Taking all of her beauty in

I walk up to her and say “hello,” thus my journey has begun again

I will remember this day till the end

me and my crazyness anyhow enjoy

well the verdict is in yes she did cry but i think your right it is a mother thing because she was all happy and stuff tears of joy HMMM.... still not sure hehe

AWESOME poem my mom cried when she read mine :'( i am sure your mom will also

i like this poem great story is there a connection to your life? just curious

Mom

You have always been there

The one person that would never go away

I always took you for something that will always be

And now I know you’re here to stay

You’re the one person I miss when I am not there to stay

I will be leaving you mom we are never free

It is only time that stands the distance

But before I leave take this one last walk with me

I remember the childhood

I was only a boy but I loved thee

I would run around and play

When I was hurt you would tend to me

When the hour grew dark

The sun fell from the never ending sky

I knew I would have to come in

You were always waiting for me inside

A new dawn has risen

High school is here college just around the bend

A young lad at heart I still am

But you are always there to tell me I am your kid

I will always be your little Ryan

With the worms and lizards and don’t forget the snake

The years are going by but your still there at my side

Graduation day the tears welling up in your eyes, time to open the new gate

A college kid I am now

All grown up into the man you taught me to be

It is harder and harder to see you now

Work and school and so much more to see

But I want you to know you will always be with me

It is not a dream mom

The bond we share I will never let go

You have been my post to lean on

Back now from our one last walk

Life is so short so surreal

The one thing I know that was not a dream

Is my love for you and that’s how I feel.

your mind is a beautiful thing... you can do anything once you set your mind to it... it can only be a prison if you allow it to be anyhow very well done congrats.

interesting poem that all i gots to say...

ditto great job