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Falcon2001

The Morning After

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Oh, It's the morning after

And nothing will ever be the same

'Cause you had to play those games

And she had to, too

 

Yeah it's the morning after

And the realization's setting in

You've steeped yourself in sin

Without even thinking

 

Oh it's the morning after

And all you can think about is shame

And all your dreams have gone away

And she has too

 

And I tried so hard

To do things right

And I wish I could just say I love her

 

Oh I tried my best

But it wasn't enough

To keep this pain from growing in me

 

It's the morning after

And the pain deep in her eyes

It makes you want to cry

'Cause things went too fast

 

Yeah...

 

It's the morning after.

 

 

 

I would like to note that the events herein described did NOT actually happen (leastaways, not to me). It's just kind of a theme I've been thinking about lately, and I finally broke my writer's block.

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Broke your Writer's Block? Smashed it with a hammer!

 

Act in the passion of the moment, repent at leisure - in song format!

 

Welcome back. :)

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Hahaha... at first I was like... UH OH WILLY!!!!!!!!!! But then I read your subnote. haha... ROAR! Yeah welcome back! Nice work... yet again. I don't think you have a bad one! I love Peredhil... he always has such nice things to say and hugs and he brought me back. Yeah! Keep writing... stay away from anime! Haha... the morning after... they made a pill for that y'know.

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Falcon;

 

My friend, glad to hear the such event didnt transpire in your own world.. Very good news.. But onto the poem.. I like the flow.. The structure. its very good, it has depth.. It reaches out and touches you.. In my own mind, I started to visualize what was happening.. the words brought your poem to life, and to me, that tells me its a DAMN GOOD POEM.. Good Job man.. Glad your blocks gone!

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This is really good Falcon, can't say much about it.

Well, maybe one thing, a piece of advice my parents gave me.

 

"Don't do it, but if you do, use protection."

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