Tasslehoff Posted April 23, 2003 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2003 I am glad you had a chance to look thru thepen Natalie.. Its an amazing place..I hope you soon put in an application and become a member.. Also, one must not thank me, for bringing you here, but must thank the elders and ancients of the pen and all its other members, for making such a place to come to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 24, 2003 Report Share Posted April 24, 2003 "The highs and lows..." your latest captures the feeling behind that simple line. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted April 25, 2003 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2003 (edited) You are right there my friend, Peredhil. Much has been running through my mind, I feel totally lost in the confusion and my only savior is also my only pain as this point in my life..Crazy love crap.. [ I posted a poem initially and realized I had posted it already.. lol.. crazy me.. ] **~ Whispering Anew ~** The night gone so cold, Past haunting me, wherever I go I walk in the crowded room, Without a clue of what I should do Hopelessly my eyes fall upon you I hear a sweet voice, flowing from your gentle lips The realization hits me hard and fair The voice whispers of starting "anew" Leaping for the light, clutching to hope I decided to speak with you And from then on, I knew what it was I just wanted to spend more time with you. Edited April 25, 2003 by Tasslehoff - AngelXIIX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted April 26, 2003 Report Share Posted April 26, 2003 whisperign anewl: good stuff... don't take this the wrong way, but actually reminds me of "teenage dirtbag" by wheatus you capture the awkard moment pretty well... revery the dreamlost "waste my days..." (wheezer) the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gjunon Posted April 26, 2003 Report Share Posted April 26, 2003 hmm tass interesting poem i hope you are doing alright still i like the flow it has good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted April 29, 2003 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2003 Love is just so depressing isnt it? =- Over The Edge -= As I look into your eyes, All I wish to do is die, For the image that appears and disappears, Doesn't show me in your life, Put to the side on a cold night, A fury of anger and sorrow, It all throws me over the edge, Down I fall, Life passing bye, As I sink, drowning in my own love for you…. But do not worry. I am fine. It was just a bit of writing to get some pain outta my system. I am as happy as can be with my new g.f. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted May 9, 2003 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2003 ~Running Rememberance~ I never asked you to give it all up, Leaving everything blowing in the wind, Out of your sight I am, like the crumbled paper note of our love, Never asking for your sympathy, never wanting you to feel sorry for me, I just wanted you by my side; Whispering, Whispering; Everything will be alright..alright.. All I needed was the truth, Not the delivered lies... -Chorus- I stand here face to face, With the troubles of the past, Someone I thought I knew, One who loved to laugh, Knew how to smile making my day, Laid down the yellow brick path, But you veered off the path, Outta my life. -Chorus- So I needed all of the truth, Why is it such a big deal, Knowing I would do the same for you, I wonder why the hell are you hiding, Running away I wonder if its me, Is it my fault, Did I cause all of my own pain, Wishing there was something I could do.. Hoping; Wishing; Dreaming.. They are all the same to me, Nothing to change your mind, Darkness swallowing me whole, Depression once again filling up my once vibrant mind. -Chorus- I stand here face to face, With the troubles of the past, Someone I thought I knew, One who loved to laugh, Knew how to smile making my day, Laid down the yellow brick path, But you veered off the path, Outta my life. -Chorus- What can I do; Is there anything I can say, Life has no more meaning to my eyes, You threw the paper out the window, Don't you see that the story of you and me, It could be real, be the real fantasy deal, But you're too dammned afraid to admit it, All that wasted time not even worth a dime, But what could I ever say to your heart so thick I am slowly but surely floating away, Out of Sight, Out of your mind I fly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted May 20, 2003 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2003 Reliving They told me there was no way, It just wasnt going to be happening, Told me straight up it couldnt be done, Just another damned battle that couldnt be won, They throw me excuses; one right after another, You know what I am talking about, But you ignore it; Too stubborn; Too good for it all, Trying to break through the walls, Forcing my way in; Making a lil' room to breathe, Pushing me out again; Slap in the damned face, Down the steps I fall; Thrown back into my place, Back to the hell; The hell I want out of, Asking for your help; But your too damned stubborn; Too damned good for me. Post comment in the Critics Corner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted May 28, 2003 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2003 Untitled For This I Gave Up Trying Not Wanting To Hide In The Shadows My Turn To Go The Other Way The Pain To Great To Turn Around Again Wishing I Would Die, Seemingly Easier That Way No, Dont Come Near, You Dont Need To Bother I Can Handle This Pain, Just A Repeat I Am Just Falling Farther, Farther Into The Void Standing All Alone In The Darkness Aching Heart, Screaming Soul Take Your Eyes Of Me, Burning With-In Me Hate And Sorrow Surging Through My Veins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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