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Deadly Nightshade

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Is there really a heaven?

Is there really a hell?

Or us all this made up

To keep us in line?

 

Can we reach Nirvana

Or is Nirvana

Just the breaking point

In sanity

 

They say in Afghanistan

When you die.

You get 70 virgins

Then why is that the person saying this

Is not dying for there country?

 

I wonder if I will ever know these questions

Maybe I will

Maybe I wont...

I guess I will never know..Untill I die

Or go utterly Insane

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I like the questions presented, but this doesn't really sound like a poem to me. You should look at it and think of a way you could make it flow more.

 

Can we reach Nirvana

Or is Nirvana

Just the breaking point

In sanity

If that's the case I think I have reached Nirvana. Hehehe.

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lol @ archaneus, this is actually a neat subject to do it on, but i agree with Arc, it need a better flow to it..

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