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Fluke

The Songstress

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Disclaimer - I write for fun and rarely retouch my work, but I really welcome feedback, critical or otherwise.


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Sing for me

He said

And so I did

Sing harder

He cried

And so I did


Lift your voice to the skies

And so I did

Lift your voice to the Heavens!

But my voice cracked

The sound was lost

And he left me


Sing for me

He said

And so she did

Sing harder

He cried

And so she did


Lift your voice to the skies

And so she did

Lift your voice to the Heavens!

And so she did

She was perfect

So he worshipped her.


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:)

 

(And it's good to see

that others, whose opinions

I've come to value, also like

your stuff.

Looking forward to more.)

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Thank you all!

 

I tend to only write in free form.

Haiku's were the only form of poetry that they managed to impress on me properly at school. Sonnets terrify me.

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