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~ part dutch, translation below, but it doesn't scan as well for some reason ~

 

 

You lose yourself

I lose myself in you

 

Het is het hele eenzijdige

alleen bij jou

 

no chance to be fully me

no chance to be fully you

 

So

 

You lose your self

I define my self through you

 

This is not the way forward

 

 

27/11/2014, wageningen

 

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translated bit:

 

It's the whole onesidedness

only at yours

 

 

~ as I look at it, it's a work in progress.. tell me what you see and I'll try to tell you what I want ^_^ ~

Edited by Appy

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oh dear, if that resonates then either my poem is wrong or something with you two, and I sincerely hope for the first then :P

 

also, yay hugs! *huggles back ^_^ *

 

Could you explain what resonates? Then I might find what I at least 'don't' want to express and how to change it to what it does mean for me.

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Ah then I didn't screw up ^_^ The whole point was that losing yourself is not always a good thing. But I'm glad you two do think so :D

 

No sorry needed! *huggles again* perfectly capable at asking what you meant ;)

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