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Atadiusti

Dark Angel

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Another day

Another time

To feel the ever-closing pressures of life

I need

Someone to hold

And tell me everything is fine

I'm about to go insane

Will I ever be,

Can I ever be alright?

 

I'll be

I'll be your dark angel

I'm watching you

from the shadows

and I'll watch you from up above

and I'll be

your guardian angel

I will protect you

from all evil

and ill be with you

through all your troubles

I'll be your dark angel

 

Everything is gonna be fine

Everything is going to be alright

Don't give up on life

Before the sun rises again

You must make it through this nightmare

You're not alone

I'm right here with you

Don't feel alone

I'm right here for you

I can tell that you're hurting

You tell me you have it rough, but you're not alone

 

(I..)

(I know...)

(I feel...)

END

THIS

NOW!

 

I know

I know pain no one alive should know

I feel

I feel pain no one ever should hold

Tell me have you seen seen a knife in your gut?

Have you ever felt a hand on your throat?

Have you ever known

Have you ever known the sorrow of being alone?

Have you stared death in the face on your own?

(But you're not alone)

 

I'll be

I'll be your dark angel

I'm watching you

from the shadows

and I'll watch you from up above

and I'll be

your guardian angel

I will protect you

from all evil

and ill be with you

through all your troubles

I'll be your dark angel

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This is good, it felt a little like a different poem in the middle, but worked.

 

I also kind of felt that it was more of a song.

 

Perhaps you could put it to music, or maybe one of the Pennites (like Jason) could do it.

 

On to your other works!!!

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