Peredhil Posted December 26, 2004 Report Share Posted December 26, 2004 I like the effective use of formatting. The double spacing gives me a sense of the endurance of climbing the mountain. This evokes memories of diverse things such as Lloyd Alexander and Final Fantasy - which is an odd mixture but fun. Welcome back - it's nice to see you post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted December 26, 2004 Report Share Posted December 26, 2004 hmm... ya know this poem reminds very strongly of another...I read in school 10 or so years ago... I can't remember who wrote it or even the name, but it was took place in a similar setting using a long column troops in a valley during the nights as a metaphor... i will look for it and send it to you if I find it... rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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