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The snow-capped mountains of hell
He grunted as the last pick fell
Whoever said this was a good idea
Obviously had a head full of dust hair
The snow-capped mountains of hell
Where if falling no one would hear you yell
The peak is here but what view for me
More damned mountains and then the sea
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Oops, next line.... - Would you hold it for me?
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OOC: EEee *wriggles* My thanks, I look forward to exploring The Pen further.
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Thank you all!
I tend to only write in free form.
Haiku's were the only form of poetry that they managed to impress on me properly at school. Sonnets terrify me.
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She shifted her feet for the dozenth time, trying to remember all that she had meant to say before approaching the door. Palms clenching with a squelch before she looked down with a disgusted sigh; shaking the hands out with a mutter.
"You are a calm and secure person with a lot to offer, you make a good carrot cake and can fold laundry without wrinkles, no worries!"
The last of that motivational speech came out slightly cracked and raised, an eyebrow joined it as she shook her head at her own folly.
"Just knock on the door, what is the worst that could happen?"
"Uh, uh, laughter and looks that ask why I've bought a scrap of ink dotted paper to a place of such importance?"
"I need to stop talking to myself, what if someone is in there, hears this and adds crazy to the list, just drop it and go Fluke!"
Heeding her own perhaps slightly over reactive advice she placed the paper with all the squiggles and ink blots carefully on the floor in front of the door. Perhaps with luck, the wind might blow it away and now one need ever know she had ventured here. She turned and started away with stealthy little steps better suited to a skulk.
Below are the sum of the marks on the paper in full.
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Applicant: Fluke
Age: Does that still apply these days? I don't know, Botox has changed things and women old enough to be my grandmother look thirty. When did everyone younger than me start looking like they're prepubescent and definitely not old enough to be driving by themselves? 30.
Writing form of Choice: Do I have to choose just one? I mean I would choose poetry but to be honest I would miss telling stories and being involved in them, there's a great deal to miss out on in this world.
Description: Over exuberant with a dash of terror? Or do they mean my looks? A strange lady with odd clothing and brightly coloured hair? Or my brain... foggy and caffeine fueled run by a Squirrel and a Cat.
ApplicationalSubmitted Writing:Lift thine eyes to the tumbling heavens
Drink ye cup of darkened spirits
For tonight I shall tell ye of magical wonders
And show ye all I have seen
Blood crusted Jewels
Stone cold, uncaring
A sweet lovers caress
Softly warm and heartfelt
Keep an eye on the path for it is rocky and hard fought
And listen to all of the words you've been taught
But remember of all the ones of love
The sweet bewitchment that comes from above.
I'm naught but a wanderer and though my passion flies
My pen is held with wooden hand that captures but a guise
Of silken thoughts that float across a space that does not understand timeMy head is filled with imagery that cannot be described
My soul longs to give voice to what I see but it hunkers deep inside
Please accept this humble offering, I'm sorry if it slights
My poetry is what I do when I cannot sleep at nights.
The Teal PoetFluke
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A topic dear to my heart, I like the escapism this poem implies.
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Loving your imagery.
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Critique welcome---I dont know how it worksI can only wonder whyThe way the world tips and spinsBeneath a brightened skyWho left the light on?Turned off the nightLeft all my oddityOut in plain sightYou don't understand itBut then neither do IYou ask me questionsWhile I stare at the skyWhat is it you want from me?In a confused state such as mineThere's nothing I can give to youSince I left sanity behindBut there is one thing I can tell youOne thing I cant hideIt all starts inside of youInsanity begins with the mind.
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Disclaimer - I write for fun and rarely retouch my work, but I really welcome feedback, critical or otherwise.---Sing for meHe saidAnd so I didSing harderHe criedAnd so I didLift your voice to the skiesAnd so I didLift your voice to the Heavens!But my voice crackedThe sound was lostAnd he left meSing for meHe saidAnd so she didSing harderHe criedAnd so she didLift your voice to the skiesAnd so she didLift your voice to the Heavens!And so she didShe was perfectSo he worshipped her.
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So she danced slowly onAnd in the beginningStep heavy and wrongThere was no livingSo she danced slowly onLeaving shreds of selfIn prints small and wanShe with no healthSo she danced slowly onTrying to rememberWhat comes before dawnThat doesn't offend herSo she danced slowly onWrestling with ideasThat seem woebegoneBut lacking in tearsSo she danced slowly onAnd by the end of the nightHer steps slowly belongTo laughter and light--New Line - When the madness overcame you
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Your second line was confusing because it was.---She spun a silken lifelineThe pressure of a touch could callHer future would not declineSheltered against the corner wallHe lifted up his head to scentSmells lingering along the fenceThen shuffled on with energy pentSpines rippling in his defense---Next Line: The sound echoed for days
First Lines (V. 2.0)
in Banquet Room
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Responding to my own line (badly) because I's bored.
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Would you hold it for me?
Would you ensure it's safe?
Could you wait and see?
Could you stand the chafe?
Would you hold it for me?
Would you treat it as art?
Could you let me be free?
Could you keep my heart?
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Next line - Dusk and other deadly dances