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Fluke

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  1. Responding to my own line (badly) because I's bored.

     

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    Would you hold it for me?

    Would you ensure it's safe?

    Could you wait and see?

    Could you stand the chafe?

     

    Would you hold it for me?

    Would you treat it as art?

    Could you let me be free?

    Could you keep my heart?

     

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    Next line - Dusk and other deadly dances

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  2. The snow-capped mountains of hell

    He grunted as the last pick fell

    Whoever said this was a good idea

    Obviously had a head full of dust hair

     

    The snow-capped mountains of hell

    Where if falling no one would hear you yell

    The peak is here but what view for me

    More damned mountains and then the sea

     

     

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    Oops, next line.... - Would you hold it for me?

  3. Thank you all!

     

    I tend to only write in free form.

    Haiku's were the only form of poetry that they managed to impress on me properly at school. Sonnets terrify me.

  4. She shifted her feet for the dozenth time, trying to remember all that she had meant to say before approaching the door. Palms clenching with a squelch before she looked down with a disgusted sigh; shaking the hands out with a mutter.

     

    "You are a calm and secure person with a lot to offer, you make a good carrot cake and can fold laundry without wrinkles, no worries!"

     

    The last of that motivational speech came out slightly cracked and raised, an eyebrow joined it as she shook her head at her own folly.

     

    "Just knock on the door, what is the worst that could happen?"

    "Uh, uh, laughter and looks that ask why I've bought a scrap of ink dotted paper to a place of such importance?"

    "I need to stop talking to myself, what if someone is in there, hears this and adds crazy to the list, just drop it and go Fluke!"

     

    Heeding her own perhaps slightly over reactive advice she placed the paper with all the squiggles and ink blots carefully on the floor in front of the door. Perhaps with luck, the wind might blow it away and now one need ever know she had ventured here. She turned and started away with stealthy little steps better suited to a skulk.

     

     

    Below are the sum of the marks on the paper in full.

     

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    Applicant: Fluke

    Age: Does that still apply these days? I don't know, Botox has changed things and women old enough to be my grandmother look thirty. When did everyone younger than me start looking like they're prepubescent and definitely not old enough to be driving by themselves? 30.

    Writing form of Choice: Do I have to choose just one? I mean I would choose poetry but to be honest I would miss telling stories and being involved in them, there's a great deal to miss out on in this world.

    Description: Over exuberant with a dash of terror? Or do they mean my looks? A strange lady with odd clothing and brightly coloured hair? Or my brain... foggy and caffeine fueled run by a Squirrel and a Cat.

     

    Applicational Submitted Writing:

     

    Lift thine eyes to the tumbling heavens

    Drink ye cup of darkened spirits

    For tonight I shall tell ye of magical wonders

    And show ye all I have seen

     

    Blood crusted Jewels

    Stone cold, uncaring

    A sweet lovers caress

    Softly warm and heartfelt

     

    Keep an eye on the path for it is rocky and hard fought

    And listen to all of the words you've been taught

    But remember of all the ones of love

    The sweet bewitchment that comes from above.

     

    I'm naught but a wanderer and though my passion flies

    My pen is held with wooden hand that captures but a guise

    Of silken thoughts that float across a space that does not understand time

    My head is filled with imagery that cannot be described

    My soul longs to give voice to what I see but it hunkers deep inside

    Please accept this humble offering, I'm sorry if it slights

    My poetry is what I do when I cannot sleep at nights.

     

    The Teal Poet

    Fluke

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  5. Critique welcome


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    I dont know how it works

    I can only wonder why

    The way the world tips and spins

    Beneath a brightened sky


    Who left the light on?

    Turned off the night

    Left all my oddity

    Out in plain sight


    You don't understand it

    But then neither do I

    You ask me questions

    While I stare at the sky


    What is it you want from me?

    In a confused state such as mine

    There's nothing I can give to you

    Since I left sanity behind


    But there is one thing I can tell you

    One thing I cant hide

    It all starts inside of you

    Insanity begins with the mind.


  6. Disclaimer - I write for fun and rarely retouch my work, but I really welcome feedback, critical or otherwise.


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    Sing for me

    He said

    And so I did

    Sing harder

    He cried

    And so I did


    Lift your voice to the skies

    And so I did

    Lift your voice to the Heavens!

    But my voice cracked

    The sound was lost

    And he left me


    Sing for me

    He said

    And so she did

    Sing harder

    He cried

    And so she did


    Lift your voice to the skies

    And so she did

    Lift your voice to the Heavens!

    And so she did

    She was perfect

    So he worshipped her.


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  7. So she danced slowly on

    And in the beginning

    Step heavy and wrong

    There was no living


    So she danced slowly on

    Leaving shreds of self

    In prints small and wan

    She with no health


    So she danced slowly on

    Trying to remember

    What comes before dawn

    That doesn't offend her


    So she danced slowly on

    Wrestling with ideas

    That seem woebegone

    But lacking in tears


    So she danced slowly on

    And by the end of the night

    Her steps slowly belong

    To laughter and light


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    New Line - When the madness overcame you

  8. Your second line was confusing because it was.


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    She spun a silken lifeline

    The pressure of a touch could call

    Her future would not decline

    Sheltered against the corner wall


    He lifted up his head to scent

    Smells lingering along the fence

    Then shuffled on with energy pent

    Spines rippling in his defense


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    Next Line: The sound echoed for days

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