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Rust bleeding through desert sand

Yellow sun, a stark blue sky

Wind blown shaded grottos sigh

 

Red rocks and yellow grey strands

Mauve against a faded green

Vistas like I've never seen

 

Softly painted desert lands

Carved into a surreal style

Winsome like her fading smile

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Cool, althought I've never thought of the desert as 'winsome'--or a fading smile, either--but I suppose there can be other ways to interpret the word 'winsome'...anyway, nice job.

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Thanks for the comments. Deserts can be desolate places but it is definately not lifeless and they can be very beautiful. It is appropriate to call it winsome in this particular case. Three hours into the visit of the Nevada State Park I looked up quietly and say out loud "... you had fun making this one didn't you?"

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